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SamiSalsa [2010-01-09 06:05:54 +0000 UTC]

It will be easy to forget you...
I just can't look to the sky
or even remember the sea...


that parts the one that snagged me, you captered my interest, and you related to me personally. good job, and thanks for yor greatness. ;]

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Lindzgal [2009-05-19 14:09:55 +0000 UTC]

This is so bittersweet and beautiful at the same time. I love the way you wrote this. I guess we never forget someone we love...
Linda

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TakeoX [2009-01-26 04:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely Beautiful !

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crazyworld1 [2009-01-21 17:07:28 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! I LOVE IT

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RoyalBlackheart [2009-01-01 17:55:19 +0000 UTC]

*sniff* Wow.

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LeeshLater [2008-10-19 17:39:11 +0000 UTC]

OH-MY-GOD!!

BEAUTIFUL!!! <3

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ReaperOfDarkness419 [2008-10-15 22:32:32 +0000 UTC]

man its so touching *sniff* I almost cried...And there is no way im joking on this

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nativetigris [2008-09-25 06:09:36 +0000 UTC]

can u tell me how to make a poetry deviation pleeease

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LaTul1pe [2008-09-05 15:41:26 +0000 UTC]

*grins* good one

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fozmoz [2008-08-22 13:47:25 +0000 UTC]

never forget, remember the good times.

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shirinzZ [2008-08-20 10:51:42 +0000 UTC]

absoloutly touching

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Miss-Nici [2008-07-27 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

I love it! ^_^

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scribbledpage [2008-06-21 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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kkshockrox0 [2008-05-06 20:54:49 +0000 UTC]

that's deep

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croswhite [2008-05-02 21:33:53 +0000 UTC]

it took my breath away, Beautiful.

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loulou2007 [2008-04-10 22:47:04 +0000 UTC]

I USE YOUR TEXT HERE

[link]

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R-A-W [2008-04-03 19:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Lovely. And unfortunately, too-often true.

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marissaLschwartz [2008-03-29 22:00:58 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. Thanks for writing something that I feel makes me a bit more unalone and human. <3

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johohanna [2008-03-01 22:42:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah was just browsing, this caught my eye, and then I saw I'd already found and faved it before Just thought I'd congratulate you on capturing a feeling that is obviously shared by so many...

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My-Original-Sin [2008-02-13 10:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Your poem really touched me. Thank you

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Das-Orelose [2008-02-12 23:08:17 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing. Very likely the best poem I have read here on dA. I can only wish I could write a poem this good. The picture matches the poem perfectly. Great job +fave.

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Knightmare81 [2008-02-08 20:54:29 +0000 UTC]

I just came across this today a little late i know but it is very beautiful. I like the notion that you can't really forget a past love because for better or worse it is part of you.

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IsabellaMichel [2007-12-04 02:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow, so calm but so sad. Kudos to yo because it was awesome. ^^ Beautiful image in the beggining by the way.

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lachinina [2007-11-25 05:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Sad and gorgous.

Amazingly honest.

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punchika [2007-10-31 17:19:46 +0000 UTC]

it's beautifully written! I love it

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nindui [2007-10-08 03:27:47 +0000 UTC]

love it!

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Chaldemone [2007-09-09 07:43:33 +0000 UTC]

Hm... I suggest changing "on" to "in" in the second to last line of the poem...

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Tremium [2007-08-16 15:15:54 +0000 UTC]

love it

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juntung [2007-07-24 05:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Gosh that is heartbreakingly beautiful. ;; I felt like I wanted to cry. The blue tones of the picture add to the melancholy of the mood of the poem and you can feel the loneliness in both. ;; <3

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PagesOfDreams [2007-07-19 20:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Very touching, wonderful job
I like the striking ending

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drop-asd [2007-04-16 11:44:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! truly stunning! i love it

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tearFromAstar [2007-04-11 09:33:18 +0000 UTC]

beautiful..

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Kuashi [2007-03-19 06:07:25 +0000 UTC]

This is such a beatiful and sad poem, and so very true. I know the feeling all to well. Amazing work.

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internalchaos [2007-03-13 19:19:45 +0000 UTC]

So true... It makes me want to cry.

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JackalAlpha [2007-01-06 08:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Eh...geh.
Love it.

It's feels so sincere. It fits so many people, including me.

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annydeng [2007-01-04 07:03:22 +0000 UTC]

This simple poem expresses perfectly. Beautiful work!

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extreme1o1 [2006-12-03 22:38:33 +0000 UTC]

ta muito sentimental
gostei!

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popeium [2006-11-05 15:25:19 +0000 UTC]

sad but true... i feel your pain...

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zed666 [2006-11-03 14:07:21 +0000 UTC]

jesus christ...this actually made me cry right now.

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inzehhat [2006-10-15 05:06:13 +0000 UTC]

holy... holy, i dont know what comes after, but this is...

i dont even know, you amaze me.

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mjmmartins [2006-09-26 15:54:39 +0000 UTC]

"I'll just have to forget myself..." That’s a magic sentence! I love the poem because it defines clearly the one thing that should really mater in life - Love.

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Jueaile [2006-09-23 23:03:30 +0000 UTC]

wow, amazing

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InbrokenShadows [2006-08-27 00:43:09 +0000 UTC]

I feel you, oh how do I feel you!

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DRAKE-X [2006-08-26 11:52:20 +0000 UTC]

triste mas lindo!!!
bom trabalho!

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crypticshadows [2006-07-10 02:52:16 +0000 UTC]

So sad and pretty...

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MxSable [2006-07-03 03:19:19 +0000 UTC]

I've read many of the most favourited poems, and many of them are only in the top list because they have been Daily D'd. I like this one alot. it's well written and it's like putting a twist on how difficult it is to forget someone you love.
So well done ! :fav+:

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