1oooinkstains [2012-08-29 03:32:50 +0000 UTC]
Ugh... I'm sorry, but I stopped reading after:
Let's face it
your screwed without it.
I mean, the grammar there is so very bad. You made the cardinal mistake of your/you're and it reads weird without extra punctuation. It would be much better as:
Let's face it:
you're screwed without it.
or as:
Let's face it.
You're screwed without it.
I mean, I know it's just a grammar mistake, but typos and grammar mistakes go a long way in a field like this. I know this and I'm not even a pro. I'm not trying to be condescending... But I'm just saying.
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