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Published: 2003-08-01 08:48:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 97; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Lies within-A demons dream.
An angels wrath,
The light misleads.
My way is false,
I must turn right..
Free this hope
Embrace my plight.
Sorrow\'s plea
Fades away.
Miss the past
which led the way.
Today I cried
To see your spite..
Just for this dream
I\'ll live at night.
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Comments: 2
You're right Ud, clinging to the past doesn't get you anywhere.
But it's hard to let go of it isn't it?...
Anyway, does writing about pain make you feel any better? *shrugs* Maybe it does for you. I tried it once, but everyone got annoyed at me so I gave it up.
You do have talent, in your artwork and in your writing, but don't always drench it in darkness and hate. K?
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it was sweet and short and too the point... nice style.... to each their own... good job on the poem. and just keep lettin da ink flow... aiight and youll do aiight
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