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TreuVonTrapp [2008-02-17 03:40:15 +0000 UTC]
"The only thing I don't like about blending so far is that I think it increases the odds of the graphite transferring onto other stuff (like the opposite pages in yonder sketchbook) though that might not always be the case. I dunno. I'm new at it."
Yes, yes it does. And it's a bitch. There's some sort of spray you can get.. its an aerosol. It puts a sort of finish on the page so nothing rubs off. But you gotta do it after the image is completed otherwise you won't be able to work on it anymore..
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starder [2008-02-16 08:49:48 +0000 UTC]
Ya know, this one aint half bad. She looks a little rounder than the actual girl, but it stylizes it. Your choices in shading on the shirt seem kind of sporadic, and a little loose and free spirited, though. That and the shape of the mouth, but I understand how that is. Lips are an awkward thing to draw.
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ElNeroDiablo [2008-02-14 04:17:01 +0000 UTC]
*light round of applause*
Congrats mate, you've made a stunning image almost identical to the real Kari!
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bishie-serge [2008-02-13 17:16:45 +0000 UTC]
The first thing I can think of when I look at the pic is that her face looks a little flat to me. It may be the fact that there is less shading on the actual features than on the hair and body areas.
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akaiLV [2008-02-13 10:25:15 +0000 UTC]
Hrrrm, you know, what you've said about shading has me curious. I'm not much of a artist though, so I can't do it myself to see....
Know if anybody has put up some kind of before/after pics as examples?
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pdonkeh [2008-02-13 08:04:25 +0000 UTC]
Nice job on this! You're definitely getting the hang of realism. Just one thing I might mention, a little nugget of wisdom that I found infinitely useful in improving realism portraits - don't outline the lips. try to just fill in the shape with color - or, if you really can't do it without outlines, make them light, instead or dark, bold strokes. It'll come out looking a lot more realistic :3
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DanShive In reply to pdonkeh [2008-02-13 16:09:53 +0000 UTC]
This is good advice; I'm still getting used to that mentality of not outlining certain things and letting the shading handle it. I mean, I'm a cartoonist, not a... um... ok, this Dr. McCoy joke has collapsed. Just walk away... *runs*
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KiddoBradley [2008-02-13 07:03:50 +0000 UTC]
Good, good. I'd keep working on it, to get it closer. Not at all a bad start, though.
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Paladin343 [2008-02-13 05:36:43 +0000 UTC]
I haven't seen Mythbusters in a while--does she have a particularly aquiline nose? Otherwise, awesome. I love the eyes particularly.
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Ankhareon [2008-02-13 03:18:31 +0000 UTC]
there's indeed a resemblance, she just seems more round than Kari
mainly the crazed look
or have I not been watching enough mythbusters in widescreen?
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DanShive In reply to Ankhareon [2008-02-13 03:30:00 +0000 UTC]
The face looks round because the chin is too short. I just did an overlap in Photoshop to compare, and while much of it goes together pretty closely, the chin is definitely off.
I believe it's because I used her nose as a vertical frame of reference, and I think I used a measurement going to the bottom of the nose to about where it meets the eyes, when it should have been from the bottom of the nose to the top of the eyes. The latter would have been close to perfect.
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DanShive In reply to DanShive [2008-02-13 03:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Also, her left shoulder extends too far, and predictably, her hair is more "poofy" horizontally than it should be. Yay Photoshop for checking stuff!
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Ankhareon In reply to DanShive [2008-02-13 06:13:10 +0000 UTC]
is there anything it can't do?
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KosMos999 In reply to Ankhareon [2008-02-14 04:35:52 +0000 UTC]
It can not bear children... yet.
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Ankhareon In reply to KosMos999 [2008-02-14 06:44:44 +0000 UTC]
that's the point at which it will take over the world
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drakkenlupen [2008-02-13 03:02:55 +0000 UTC]
i feel as if she is staring in to my very soul. MAKE IT STOP! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! *runs into a wall*
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DeckardCanine [2008-02-13 02:58:28 +0000 UTC]
Realistic and photogenic, yet kinda creepy.
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