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Dalgeor — My Little Devil

Published: 2009-11-19 02:05:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2002; Favourites: 98; Downloads: 68
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There was no moon shining in the sky of that foggy night.
There were no signs of life on that forgotten forest.
The darkness of the night in a place where there were no sings of life was something beautiful for Bloody Mary. Not even the grass grows there, and only the dead trees stand up.

That is why she likes the Forgotten Forest so much. There, she can be herself, she can think quietly about her life, and she feels a total solitude. She usually goes there when she has to think about something, or when something is disturbing her mind. But that night there was nothing to think about. Her mind was in peace, but she had the feeling that she must go to the forgotten forest.

After a long walking through those dead trees, her sences found that little colt hidden in the fog.

"It is a pity I already ate...such an easy prey is not found frequently" she thought for herself, but then, that little colt called her attention.

He was not a common horse, Bloody Mary could feel something strange on his essence. There was something uncommon on his blood. Her curiosity made her approach the foal, and that was when Monsta realised that someone was watching him.

The colt felt scared, his instincts told him that that mare was dangerous. He tried to run away, but the quiet and gentle voice of the mare stopped him.

"Don´t go" she said, and the little colt suddenly became paralized by the panic. His legs were shaking, but his inner braverty made him face the mare. He gazed at her eyes.

"A demon? Wow, interesting...where is your mother, lil´un?" The sweet tone of her voice made the foal feel secure again, that is one of the many tactics of Bloody Mary.

She was amazed by the little creature. She has never seen a foal like him, she didn´t know why or how, but she was sure that that foal was so special. Monsta, shocked, took a few moments to answer her question, and she used that time to observe him. His colour was very similar to her, grey manes and a dark coat. Those eyes without pupil, those strange shapes of grey markings on his body...yes, definitly, he was a demon horse.

"Mom is not here..." the foal answered very confused, he did not know what to do. Bloody Mary understood the real meaning of that sentence, the foal was all alone.

In that moment, something of him made her remember her days as a foal. She felt very identified with him: both were alone, with that evil blood running through their veins. The foal, soon or late, will have to face his true nature, and who would be a better teacher than her?

"I know what you are and what do you need. You could be my little devil." Bloody Mary would never aprove a breeding because, for her, it will be an act fo submission to the males. Her proud and honour would never permit it, so this is her only chance to be a mother. But she didn´t wanted to be a mother, she just wanted to raise an evil creature from who she could be proud of his cleverness in the future.

Monsta never stopped to gaze at her.
"I don´t need you" he said, and that was all that Bloody Mary needed in order to be fully convinced about raising that little colt. "He has the right attitude" she though for herself.

The arrogancy of the foal was not enough to stop her, and soon or late, Monsta will realise that he does need her help.

She would teach him how to survive, how to hunt, how to inflict pain on others, how to shup up his mind and only use it when it is needed. She would also teach him to listen to his instincts.

But he would teach her how to love.

Is she going to make a beast out of that foal? Or is he going to remove the beast that is inside that mare?



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English

I´m trying to adopt Monsta from . I really like that foal I´m sorry for the long bg story, I was kinda inspired lol.

about the pic, I´m proud of the soft colouring of Bloody Mary and Monsta, but I hate the background. Critics are welcomed!

Oh, I need your opinion about the frame that I used here. I think it looks great but I´m not sure...


Español

Estoy tratando de adoptar a Monsta de . Me parece un potrillo muy interesante, y creo que va muy bien con Bloody Mary. Perdón por la historia tan larga, es un requisito para la adopción y bueh se ve que estaba inspirada jaja, soy muy vaga como para traducirla xD.

Con respecto al dibujo, me encanta lo suave que quedó el coloreado de Bloody Mary y de Monsta, pero el fondo esta horrible....Críticas bienvenidas!

Ah! Necesito saber que opinan del marco que le agregué...a mi me gusta mucho como queda, le da un toque mas formal y mejora mucho la presentación.

Bloody Mary & Pic (c) myself
Monsta Design (c)
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Comments: 24

Zoba22 [2016-07-22 00:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Impresionante historia , de verdad tenes una capacidad de narrar muy envolvente, Geor, lo leí con  Google Traductor y entendí todo... creo  . Es genial, entonces ella quería tomar a ese potrillo como su hijo para convertirlo en otra bestia..me gustó el planteo del final... ¿Quién ganaría esa batalla? Esto tiene una cierta similitud con Nevisca y Darion, la yegua sin compasión y el potro de puro corazón. Aunque hay claras diferencias. Esto es bien creepy  . Lindo bosquecito para recorrer cerca de Bloody Mary >>

Ese potrillo tiene todas las agallas. Me encantó leer esto, Geor, uno de tus inicios ;u; harías grandes historias!  hay personas que utilizan un dibujo y hacen un capítulo de un cuento, eso me parece muy copado también. Suponete que de repente gusta el dibujo y entonces leen la historia o viceversa  . Sos una gran escritora. Sabes meter suspenso, me cague de las patas un poco, pensé que lo iba a matar en serio XDDDD

Aaaaw, del 2009 <3 Que bueno que lo leí!!!! Es bueno conocer más de tu querida y asesina Bloody xD porque a ella no la conocía tanto como conozco a Nevisca y Darion ^^

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Dalgeor In reply to Zoba22 [2016-07-22 14:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Woow, sabes que nunca se me habia ocurrido el apralelo entre bloody mary/monsta y nevisca/darion? Que buena comparación!! es tal cual como vos decis! Esta buenisimo descubrir esas ideas en nuestra mente que se expresan mediante distintas formas de las cuales no somos conscientes en absoluto, pero analizandolo externamente se puede notar
Mil gracias por comentar un dibujo tan antiguo Zoba, me pone re feliz que te haya gustado :d Este fue uno de los ultimos que hice antes de dejar de dibujar por varios añitos... Me dieron ganas de hacer un remake. 
Iba a adoptar ese potro de otro usuario y esta sería mi aplicación, voy a contatarla para ver si todavía estoy a tiempo de quedarme con Monsta por mas que haya sido hace casi 7 años jajaja soy la peorr!

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Tarzz96 [2009-12-27 03:36:43 +0000 UTC]

wow mate this has to be my most fav of what you have done so far i love the background and the story that you put in to it, and all the detail on both the horses i also like the stands of the little foal it's like he is so scard but at the same time he is standing he's ground all out love this great work mate

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Dalgeor In reply to Tarzz96 [2011-02-24 17:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much hun n_n I hope I did not loose the practice to draw..

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Tarzz96 In reply to Dalgeor [2011-05-11 02:32:54 +0000 UTC]

hey no worrys mate
odear i hope not mate i'm a bit like that at the moment or it's just one big art block

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SheeKNS [2009-11-24 14:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Bueno, el pic está espectacular, y la historia está muy interesante también. Los caballos están genial, y el fondo también está muy logrado, con esa atmósfera siniestra creada por la niebla que va muy bien con los personajes, y queda bien con el ambiente boscoso. La textura del camino también está muy bien, lo único que la combinación de personajes y fondos falla un poco, ya que el potro no proyecta sombra en el suelo y no parece que esté apoyado en él, quedando un poco raro. Pero por lo demás está muy bien

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Dalgeor In reply to SheeKNS [2009-12-01 18:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias La verdad no me habia dado cuenta de lo de la sombra pero ahora que lo decis veo a lo que te referis n_n muchas gracais por ahcermelo ver!

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SheeKNS In reply to Dalgeor [2009-12-03 12:11:14 +0000 UTC]

de nada

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AcuteCat [2009-11-21 00:15:41 +0000 UTC]

I like the frame, and I think you did a nice job with the background.

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Dalgeor In reply to AcuteCat [2009-11-21 00:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot

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blackrrose2 [2009-11-19 21:25:17 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful.i love the stroy its tuching and sweet and the colors and amassing background in the pick is breathatking i love it

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Dalgeor In reply to blackrrose2 [2009-11-21 00:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot! I´m glad you took the time to read the story

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blackrrose2 In reply to Dalgeor [2009-11-21 18:55:53 +0000 UTC]

your verry welcome i lvoed it.
im even working on my own harpg character.i hope they like and accept me.

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sturmfeuer [2009-11-19 15:22:38 +0000 UTC]

omg, you created such a great atmosphere in this image and the story is gorgeous .
I love especially these two passages:
""Mom is not here..." the foal answered very confused, he did not know what to do. Bloody Mary understood the real meaning of that sentence, the foal was all alone."
and
"Is she going to make a beast out of that foal? Or is he going to remove the beast that is inside that mare?"
The location of the image is so eerie *it gives me creeps*. I love Monsta´s pose - it looks suspiciously and defiant. Like he is trying to resist Bloody Mary´s voice.
Bloody Mary looks awesome (as always). Her wavy hair is beautiful. I think she has a dangerous-beautiful aura.
This is much more than I have ever expected for an adoption pic. I am enthused.
Monsta is almost yours . I would love to write you down as new owner at once but referring to my adoption rules he needs also a reference sheet first (don´t worry you will definitely get him ).

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Dalgeor In reply to sturmfeuer [2009-11-21 00:52:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww I´m so glad you liked the pic and the story!! And I´m so happy about getting Monsta I really thing he is awesome, he is going to be a great stallion but first I want to take all "juice" of his childhood.
I will be doing the ref sheet soon Thank you a lot for your comment!

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sturmfeuer In reply to sturmfeuer [2009-11-19 15:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Totally forgot about it: I like the frame^^.

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FruVider [2009-11-19 12:37:30 +0000 UTC]

Nice!
I like the story and the drawing <3

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Dalgeor In reply to FruVider [2009-11-21 00:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you a lot

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wafflesandsyrup22 [2009-11-19 02:53:01 +0000 UTC]

beautiful art piece. and the story is awesome too!

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Dalgeor In reply to wafflesandsyrup22 [2009-11-21 00:39:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot n_n

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TigresaDaina [2009-11-19 02:16:39 +0000 UTC]

aww! enseñar a amar!! me mató eso ;_;
Está impresionante la escena parece una fotomanipulacion! Está HERMOSA

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Dalgeor In reply to TigresaDaina [2009-11-21 00:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias Dainaa me alegra que te haya gustado

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Zakiro [2009-11-19 02:15:04 +0000 UTC]

omg ke hermosa escena *V*!!!!!!!!!!

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Dalgeor In reply to Zakiro [2009-11-21 00:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Muchas gracias n_n

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