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Crazyfox346 — TWG:: My name is Pikepaw.

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Description My name is Pikepaw. I am 14 moons. My home is Pebbleclan. One day I plan on leaving...
Pikepaw believed that he didn't care about the others around him. Mother's struggling to carry their kits, injured warriors and apprentices, the sudden cries which were cut off by the sounds of branches tearing away from trees which was always followed by a deafening crackling as the flames licked at the bark and burned them up. Burned everything up..
It was all background sounds. Obstacles which he would have to dodge if he wanted to survive. Because his survival was all that was meaningful for him. It was the only thing he could hear clearly in his mind, being in a trance of adrenaline which made his paws continue to plow through. He only cares about himself. He repeated that to himself. Everything else was a blur, they had no meaning. He didn't care.
Or so he thought.
He identified a loud cry from among the panic. He could hear the words clearly. He skidded to a halt, shoulder hitting off another tom as he turned around, eyes searching the pelts that ran by him. His heart thudded against his chest, telling him to flee. A sharp cry got him going again. Though not towards his original destination.
The ash covered tom heard his name being called from behind him but he continued on, hearing others to tell his tallest brother to leave him and continue to run. Voices slowly became distant and soon all he could hear was seemingly a high pitch ringing.
Pikepaw panted, eyes darting around drastically. Where are they? Where are they? The question repeated over and over, desperate to find his siblings pelts.
And he got what he wanted, but not in a way he had imagined. He almost fell over his paws as he came to a quick stop, the fire more intense in the area he was in and he felt like he was melting on the spot. His eyes lay on the crushed body of his brother among the flames.
"CREEKTALON!" He cried, awaiting a reply, a grunt, any sort of sound or movement even. But no such thing happened. 
His sister, whom he had heard his younger brother cry for was nowhere to be seen.
A small cry of dismay caught in his throat as the flame's grew bigger, causing him to finally retreat away from the burning forest. And away from the way he had gone before. Away from everything and everyone he knew. 
He couldn't go back.
Not without knowing that he had left his brother behind.
My name is Pikepaw. I am 14 moons. My home is Pebbleclan. There is no Pebbleclan. The sky flowers burned everything down. It killed my brother. I can't forgive myself. I must leave everything behind. And then my guilt will be over."



Tbc ;o;
In the end, Pikepaw really did sorta care, didn't he? ;u;

This isn't the greatest thing I've written XD But its good enough //stamps it with an "Okay i guess"
The small little bits at the beginning and the end were based on written parts from the Third Hunger games book ;v;
Also how does one draw fire? //leaps into the flames

Anyway! There will be another part for Pikepaw ;v;

Enjoy~!
Creektalon mentioned @/Furdora 
Pikepaw and art belongs to me
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Comments: 25

dehani [2015-09-16 20:36:04 +0000 UTC]

BBY NO <3 
Is that Pikepaw development I'm spotting? B)

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Crazyfox346 In reply to dehani [2015-09-17 16:02:32 +0000 UTC]

//yELLS LOUDLY
hoohohoooo ; y

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suicunetobigaara [2015-08-17 07:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh Pikepaw! I just need to cuddle you and everything!!

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Crazyfox346 In reply to suicunetobigaara [2015-08-17 12:21:01 +0000 UTC]

 

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TalaWhiteWolf [2015-08-16 20:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Hhhh omg ;n; so sad!!
Maybe Pike told Pale about Creek's death?

But the second I read that title I knew where the reference would be!

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Crazyfox346 In reply to TalaWhiteWolf [2015-08-16 20:55:52 +0000 UTC]

;v;
Ooohhh!
Maybe she waits with Kitewing because she's waiting for her family, so Pale sits with her and waits for Creek ;v;
Then when Pike comes back ((which'll be like, in the morning)) he tells em and the she-cats can be sad together ;o;

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TalaWhiteWolf In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 21:31:29 +0000 UTC]

Ooohh yeah! Maybe and Pale tries to stay strong in front of Kitewing and Pikepaw but later on she just breaks down but around the family Pale tries to console Kite and stuff

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FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh [2015-08-16 20:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Pike no! Sweetheart you can't do this! Heron is going to be a blubbering mess, he's lost his dad, two bros, his sis, and now there goes another, running away from home

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Crazyfox346 In reply to FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh [2015-08-16 20:07:02 +0000 UTC]

 
Don't worry, we won't get rid of this grump THAT easily ; ))

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FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 20:27:10 +0000 UTC]

good, I hope he's alright
I've been wanting to do another brother RP, where they make up a little bit, so whenever he gets back, would you want to?

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Crazyfox346 In reply to FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh [2015-08-16 20:28:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he'd defiantly want to talk to his bro, even if he wouldn't admit it X3
We can do it now if you want? ;v;

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FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 20:33:08 +0000 UTC]

yes heron would be happy to talk to him again
And yeah sure, I'm all for it

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Crazyfox346 In reply to FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh [2015-08-16 20:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!
Do you have Skype? If not, we can do notes ;v; ((just asking cause I'm more active on skype XD ))

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FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 21:37:22 +0000 UTC]

I do but I never ever go on it. Mainly because it's only of my phone

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Crazyfox346 In reply to FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh [2015-08-17 09:05:11 +0000 UTC]

Welp thats fine XD ;v; I can do notes so its all good ;v; Just send me a message if I don't reply in a while ((like 4 days or something lol)) , cause thats usually me telling myself "Idk what to reply, I'll give it a few minutes" but then forgetting cause im terrible //slapped

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FLUFFY-Dapple-Kitteh In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-17 17:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Omfg I do that too. I'm really bad about that if its a rp I'm not particularly interested in
One time I left it unopened for a month |D

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OMGpiku [2015-08-16 18:44:21 +0000 UTC]

PikeBae is going through some dark times.
I'm so sorry PikeBae.

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Crazyfox346 In reply to OMGpiku [2015-08-16 19:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Yee ;-;
//pats Pikebae's head

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OMGpiku In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 19:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Looks like a cinnamon roll but could actually kill you: Pike

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Crazyfox346 In reply to OMGpiku [2015-08-16 19:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Pikepaw, definition; SINnamon roll
amirite?

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OMGpiku In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 19:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Sinnamon roll would be more Pecan though? XD

Looks like a cinnamon roll but will actually kill you: Pike
Looks like he will kill you and will actually kill you: Fleeting(?)
Looks like a cinnamon roll and is a cinnamon roll: Crooked
Looks like he will kill you but is actually a cinnamon roll: Crane
SINnamon roll: Pecan

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Crazyfox346 In reply to OMGpiku [2015-08-16 19:47:39 +0000 UTC]

tru tru XD

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Red-Teal-Blue [2015-08-16 17:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Amazing artwork

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Crazyfox346 In reply to Red-Teal-Blue [2015-08-16 17:57:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;v;

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Red-Teal-Blue In reply to Crazyfox346 [2015-08-16 18:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome

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