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Cozigiraffe In reply to ??? [2012-12-01 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Hey thank you so much for taking the time to critique! (Especially for doing one for the first time). Really appreciated that you pointed out more technical things than the other comments I've gotten. Like the background. I suddenly have some ideas now that you mentioned it.
Thanks again!
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KickassAmateur In reply to Cozigiraffe [2012-12-01 22:54:06 +0000 UTC]
No problem. I just had a really big urge to critique since you asked for it and I really did like it. It was just after the initial scanning of it, it felt like something was amiss so I wanted to express it. I'm glad my ramblings got through somehow. Actually, it was rather difficult to write and I also had to restrain from suggesting stuff (would be unfair, I suppose). I mean gosh! Do people usually have such a hard time giving constrictive criticism? Nonetheless, I'm glad to be of help and I'll just check out more of your artwork when I have more time later!
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TheUltione [2012-11-17 18:18:10 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I've been anticipating seeing this picture get colored, and now that I've seen it, I'm very impressed. The first thing that strikes my fancy is the colour, of course. You've done a magnificent job capturing the essence of a carnival. The shading is quite unique as well, especially on MK's hat and mask, although the banner could use a little more of it. The background is fitting, but I think it needs a little more flair than just black with a few dots for stars (like, maybe make the bottom the horizon, since MK's up in the air). I like the approach for the Ferris wheel where it looks like a silhouette in the background. As for the layout, I like how you have MK just up there watching everything while juggling some cards. It's a refreshing sort of look to the character! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
If I were to nitpick, then I would say the balloons look like a different style of shading is used which is a tad bit distracting, and if you look closely, a little of the red balloon's color bleeds into the yellow's. It's also a bit unclear what Meta's sitting on (to me anyway..), and his feet could be a bit larger.
Overall, great picture, great concept, and Meta Knight looks sufficiently mysterious and badass even with the carnival outfit. ^-^
Just a note: this is my first formal critique, so I apologize if I'm a bit hard on you..
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Cozigiraffe In reply to TheUltione [2012-11-17 18:24:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for critiquing!
I was pretty anxious to get this colored too and I think now since I don't have as much anxiety, I can finish it up correctly.
It's not a problem at all if this is your first critique. I appreciate it! c:
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TheUltione In reply to Cozigiraffe [2012-11-17 18:27:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.. I'm glad my critique helped you.
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ACompleteFuckingFag [2016-10-28 16:37:00 +0000 UTC]
"Listen, i lost my Halberd but it still remains in the mind. It even has a casino! Halberd, casino, it's all in the mind".
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LittleCloudie [2015-07-26 14:40:40 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, I would've loved to see Galacta fitted into this. But I can see what you're saying, there really isn't that much room. Oh whale. /////trying to fantasize Galacta in a cute outfit like Metie's////
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Cozigiraffe In reply to LittleCloudie [2015-07-27 18:00:38 +0000 UTC]
I'm considering adding in Galacta Knight when I do a remake of this eventually, when I see that my art has improved some more. There's gotta be room for both. XD
Thank you!
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LittleCloudie In reply to Cozigiraffe [2015-07-27 19:16:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy! I can't wait to see it :3 And you're welcome!
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Angati [2015-07-05 01:02:51 +0000 UTC]
Very colorful and cute!
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mininerdyrambo [2015-03-20 01:38:45 +0000 UTC]
Mardi Gras Mardi Gras Mardi Gras
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ChaoCream [2014-09-15 21:50:20 +0000 UTC]
I could have sworn I favorited this... I did now for sure! Awesome picture!
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Anima-Tenshi [2014-08-14 01:20:46 +0000 UTC]
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO METAAA KNIIGGGHHHTTTTTTTT AYAGVSGVavga
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Cozigiraffe In reply to Anima-Tenshi [2014-08-18 14:43:42 +0000 UTC]
My exact reaction to Meta Knight being confirmed in Wii U SSB. XD
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Anima-Tenshi In reply to Cozigiraffe [2014-08-18 15:49:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeeesssss, also nightmare is an assist trophy now lol
Super excited I normally dont do smash or brawl but I actually enjoy playing as meta knight
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Cozigiraffe In reply to Anima-Tenshi [2014-08-18 15:54:44 +0000 UTC]
Nightmare looks amazing in the game. Hands down. I'm really interested in seeing the entire darkening effect.
Meta Knight's a little too easy to get used to playing as. Heh. I just like the fact that he can fly back up on the stage and is light enough that he doesn't drop like a rock to his death. I never can play as Bowser or Ganondorf just because of that. XD
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Cozigiraffe In reply to KirbyLove54 [2014-04-09 01:40:52 +0000 UTC]
I've never read or watched the X-men series. I have no idea who Gambito is (just looked him up now!)
Thank you!
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KirbyLove54 In reply to Cozigiraffe [2014-04-10 05:33:03 +0000 UTC]
jejeje yes he is, it was a show before, I remember the boy who give the voice talked like someone from francie xD
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Lnferni [2013-01-14 04:46:41 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting and original! Good job!
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Lnferni In reply to Cozigiraffe [2013-01-14 04:54:56 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome!
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Cozigiraffe In reply to Spookythedragon [2013-01-01 17:27:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! He's got a face-painted moon on his mask or something. XD
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LizbethLizard [2012-12-29 20:25:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh, cool! I like the colours a lot~
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papersak [2012-12-01 18:36:54 +0000 UTC]
I think my biggest nitpicks are the flags hanging from the string. I look at the line art, and they were at some point very smooth, but it seems you removed the lines and redid the flags...? It seems wherever the lines were removed, you tried to blur the edges (the cape folds show just a tad of that, too, upon comparing both images). Also, maybe the flags could use a little shading; I'm not sure if they're made from shiny material or not, but they could at least be darker where they recede into the background. And this isn't a bad thing, but the line art had some... twinkly things around the flags that were lost...?
Well, that's the bad news.
The good news is the effort you put into such a detailed image is quite commendable. I haven't wanted to comment on a stranger's art in this much detail in forever, but I was drawn to all the details as well as, well, your request for critique. Mety Knight looks adorable, and I really really like the background. The ferris wheel is gorgeous and I like how the balloons glow with it. The yellow hue on Meta Knight's lighting is a lovely tie-in to the lights behind him. The stylized cards almost... dance across the gap, if that makes sense. xD;
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MetaKnight605 [2012-12-01 13:40:58 +0000 UTC]
SOooooooooo Preettyy!!!
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Lolaboo [2012-11-29 02:14:24 +0000 UTC]
That ferris wheel is gorgeous.
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Cozigiraffe In reply to Lolaboo [2012-11-29 03:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I fixed up the ferris wheel a bit, it looks better than before. XD
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