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Published: 2009-08-20 07:47:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 30
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Description *Tumbles in with one day left to go before the mark*


Oneshot. :3


I started it, left to go work on the comic, then came back and powered through over half of the remaining words that remained to be typed. *Determined nod*.


Very Vegeta-centric, this oneshot. I was in the mood for some Veggie. :3


This oneshot takes place shortly after the recent animated special.


Summary: Vegeta Oujisama has received a mysterious envelope from his long-time rival, Son Goku; with instructions not to open it until told. For the ouji, this is far more difficult than it seems; as his peasant is not one to write letters, or keep secrets; making it all the more tempting for him. Will he break his promise and take a peek? And will he discover what the contents of the envelope hold?
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Comments: 23

LadyNomad [2009-09-06 15:14:10 +0000 UTC]

I like Vegeta's daydreams... they are so entertaining and how his brother's so different from him.

When are you going to continue on that storyline about Vegeta and Goku being a couple and stuff like that?

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Chuquita In reply to LadyNomad [2009-09-07 03:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Happy you liked it!
Vegeta's daydreams are fun to write because they make almost any situation possible. XD I found the fact that his brother's personality is almost a complete opposite of Vegeta's to be very interesting. X3 Its why I like to incorporate him into stories when I can.


Do you mean the main storyline? Yes, I'm planning to do some more oneshots/multi-chapter stories with it in the future.

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AzuraNagomii [2009-09-03 12:48:37 +0000 UTC]

I love it when Vegeta thinks Goku wants to do "things" to him. xD He's so cute when he panics. Although I was really looking forward to seeing what was in the letter. @___@ Ah well, awesome work as always.

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Chuquita In reply to AzuraNagomii [2009-09-07 02:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Vegeta's imagination completely runs away with him; and the fact that Goku's stronger than him doesn't help. XD
Happy you liked it! :3
I may do a Part 2 at some point.

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AzuraNagomii In reply to Chuquita [2009-09-07 18:13:59 +0000 UTC]

I hope you do. O3O

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MSprinkleZ [2009-08-21 05:50:13 +0000 UTC]

pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease dont leave me hangiiiinnggggg~ *whine* *sigh* Thus...it is out of my control...all I can do... is wait. *Stares intently at wall*

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Chuquita In reply to MSprinkleZ [2009-08-21 06:41:18 +0000 UTC]

*Realizes why she rarely cliffhangers*
I didn't completely know what was in the letter myself, but I elaborated on what I know on an earlier reply, and this is it:If I'd typed up Goku's letter it'd probably be about how he'd been feeling so completely bored with everything lately except for when he was hanging out with Vegeta at the party that day. He was hoping Vegeta knew why and wished to spend more time with him and for them to secretly find new ways to have fun; as he'd have to sneak out either late at night or early in the morning to do so.


It's not impossible that I won't do a Part 2 for this story; I'm going to do one for Ciento and that was originally a oneshot. :3

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MSprinkleZ In reply to Chuquita [2009-08-21 08:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh..new ways to have fun huh? *smirk*

I will be looking forward to it!

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pixelgoddess [2009-08-21 03:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Auuuuggggggghhhhh!!!!!! *faints*
You may have earned my title with this one.

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Chuquita In reply to pixelgoddess [2009-08-21 06:19:12 +0000 UTC]

I don't cliffhanger very often.
Normally I get nervous when I end on them, but things were actually working for me again so I was busy being relieved that they were working. @_@
Its always possible I might do a Part 2; I'm doing one for Ciento right now.
Happy you liked it. :3

Thank you!

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Patty-Chan [2009-08-20 20:31:00 +0000 UTC]

I love his face xD!!!

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Chuquita In reply to Patty-Chan [2009-08-21 06:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Happy you like it!

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SaiyajinRaz [2009-08-20 20:02:49 +0000 UTC]

You are an evil, evil person. *glare* How could you leave it like that! *bursts into tears* I neeeed to know... O_O

This was such an awesomely cute story - I can't believe you ended it there! *points* EVIL!

I know it's a oneshot, but... *begs for a part 2*

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Chuquita In reply to SaiyajinRaz [2009-08-21 06:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I don't completely know the contents, but having replied to an earlier comment, I came up with a semi-rough outline about what the letter would contain.

Which was something like this: If I'd typed up Goku's letter it'd probably be about how he'd been feeling so completely bored with everything lately except for when he was hanging out with Vegeta at the party that day. He was hoping Vegeta knew why and wished to spend more time with him and for them to secretly find new ways to have fun; as he'd have to sneak out either late at night or early in the morning to do so.

I was building up to a cliffhanger because I rarely do those and as it was a oneshot....


I could do a Part 2; its not like it's impossible because I'm about to start a Part 2 for Ciento, and that was originally a oneshot too.


Happy you liked the story! :3

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gokuschichi4818 [2009-08-20 13:10:10 +0000 UTC]

That cliffhanger is killing me. Please tell me what the letter said.

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Chuquita In reply to gokuschichi4818 [2009-08-21 06:11:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't completely know myself.
Though if I'd typed up Goku's letter it'd probably be about how he'd been feeling so completely bored with everything lately except for when he was hanging out with Vegeta at the party that day. He was hoping Vegeta knew why and wished to spend more time with him and for them to secretly find new ways to have fun; as he'd have to sneak out either late at night or early in the morning to do so.

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gokuschichi4818 In reply to Chuquita [2009-08-21 14:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I hope he isn't depressed.

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Nei-Ning [2009-08-20 09:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Vegeta is confused and curious at the same time "Should I or shouldn't I...?" XD

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Chuquita In reply to Nei-Ning [2009-08-21 05:43:34 +0000 UTC]

He wants to open it, but he knows if he does so before Goku tells him he may he'll be dealing with lots of trouble.

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Nei-Ning In reply to Chuquita [2009-08-21 12:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah. Goku would kick his ass if he would open the letter xD

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LordKaiten [2009-08-20 07:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Hehe nice ^^ Your work is always so cute

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Chuquita In reply to LordKaiten [2009-08-20 07:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! :3

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LordKaiten In reply to Chuquita [2009-08-20 07:55:56 +0000 UTC]

Welcome :3

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