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xzye [2013-10-14 19:22:30 +0000 UTC]
I like this alot! it's one of my favourite kind of poetic structures <3
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ChippyShark In reply to xzye [2013-10-15 17:43:13 +0000 UTC]
:'D Thank you! :'D
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HeikoriKanato [2013-07-11 09:53:43 +0000 UTC]
I love it, I like the theme of stars.
And if You feel hopeless... How can it be, that something can bring You down? A person who wrote such a good poem can't be that weak. C'mon, get up. It's not the end but everything will not be ok until You move Your ass and stop sobbing. Life is too short for that.
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ChippyShark In reply to HeikoriKanato [2013-07-11 10:49:14 +0000 UTC]
:') Thank you ever so much! x'3 i've been down sor so so so long now x'3 so i cant help but feel hopeless, i only feel that way cause it feels like a goal i am aiming for seems so impossible to reach :'D But i thank you so much for your words! I feel a lot better now~ Thank you :')
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