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Published: 2015-04-09 11:35:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Reaching the room, the team found what they were looking for. Star grinned and went over to the powerful item. "We found it....We finally found it." Star said softly as he touched it. Hikibi nodded and looked behind him for any dangers. "We better take it and go. They're surly still following us...""With that! We can save everyone right, Captain?" Aiden asked with a great big smile, yet he didn't expect the reaction he got.
Star's ear flicked and he turned his head slightly. "Save?" He questioned as he fully turned around. Hikibi looked at Star with a worried frown. "Star....What's wrong?" He noticed that his friend had taken off his bandana. Star chuckled lightly, closing his eyes. "We're not saving everyone." He simply.
Hikibi's eyes widen in shock. Surly Star, his best friend wasn't thinking of-! "Star, you're not thinking of-!?"
"I'm Sorry Hikibi." The fox said, finally looking up. "But I didn't came here to save everyone."
With a soft crackle, his right eye turned red with 8 ghostly tails appearing, showing what he truly was.
"I came here to destroy them."
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Oh no what is this? Some art of Star being a ninetails (well to point but still) and he's evil? (totally didn't plan this) oh no, what have I doooooooone?
I need some fun....
Somewhere in my head is telling me that I should have made it "come" instead of "came".....Oh well, too lazy.
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Comments: 1
I really like this
Looks like a movie still, great work.
As for the grammar, you're good.
"I came here"
Perfectly fine
If you had said "I've" instead of "I" then it should be "come" instead of "came" 
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