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Page 2 ^^ XD Here is mentioned the boy's name (Shen. Suggested by
) but not the girl's, who's named Nelia. I love her big panel, but in the small ones she doesn't looks that good :/Oh, and thans a lot to and for proofreading this. I had a few grammar errors XDD I still need a lot of english to learn XD
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Taking this as reference. I've a lot to learn to do something like this.
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Nice paneling and cool use of the bg colors. Most of the time, manga uses background or plain white and screentones to give effect but your manga style in color is really working out.
Its really cool because not much manga are in colour so there isn't much reference for what you can do!
But using colors for bg gives the overall background seems lonely as I've only seen 2 characs so far, which is a good thing if you wanted that kind of effect.
I just noticed, Outside and Vermillion is all about going outside or being free XD lol. Sis, are you having some problems? Shqre with me anytime k~ haha jkjk
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Thank you ^^
Precisely because manga is usually in B/W I wasn't sure ehat to do. Instead of screentones, I used random colors XDD
Yeah, somewhat I wanted some lonelines feeling to it. It's suposed to be night or something (don't thing they notice inside the Tower XDD ) Plus, that way I didn't have to draw more people XDDDD (I'm lazy ¬¬ )
lol I didn't noticed. But no, I don't have any probs related to freedom. On this one, it's kinda shown some angst for baing trapped. I had in mind the idea of "what's beyond of what we know", like the space, or death...
On Vermellion (which now I know it's acyually typed "vermilion" XDDD What an ass I am...) it was some political intrigue, with tragic outcome. Because of the limited space, I couldn't explain much. I love drama XDDD
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lawl XD I tend to notice you like Drama. XD Can see that from Vermillion and all your action poses! XD
and honestly dun call yourself an ass for a small mistake like that k? You're not!!
But that's really an interesting way of thinking... I was just thinking "Oooooh Shojo plot, easier to draw" and partly because most shojos are the same. Still sketching before I scan and let you proofcheck XD
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XD Yeah. Guess al I touch becomes drama XDD
XD I'm kinda idiot for some things actually XDD
Well, there're more complicated shoujo manga... I think XDD Vampire Knight is getting more complicated. But guess my real influence is from RPG's. Specially Suikoden and Xenosaga got a great impact on me.
I'll be looking forward to it
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I try. I really do try to finish a PS game but I'll be at Level 3 and like okay I'm gonna watch a DVD now and never play it again. My brother hates that. He thinks I'm wasting space on his memory card.
And I'm so stupid! I gave myself 3 days to ink 20 pages and 2 days to screentone (and I don't even know how?!) Lawl, Manga making is hard
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What? O_o You mean you never finish your games? Maybe it's not your type of game?
Can you really ink 20 pages in 3 days? =_=
Yeah, I realized that too.... Guess that's why the japanse mangaka have a few assistants... U_U
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its not. I just can't finish any game. haha. Only Gameboy pokemon XD. I'm desperately asking my bro and mom to help lol
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Are you stuck with something? You can ask me (if I know the game) or try Gamefaqs (if I'm not aviable XDD)
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lawl. Sort of. Lol. My lil bro told me some of the cheats in Gamefaqs aren't correct and he ends up more messed up in the game. Its more like, I can't find the drive to finish. If its pokemon I just flip my GB and play, for PS2 I have to on tv and stuff?
gruu, The only game I really tried playing was Phantom Brave, but I stopped because my bro was playing as well, and he forced me to watch the game with him lawl. If nt, there was the dancemat, I used it like once... but seriously, dancing games are physically tiring XDXD
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XD I didn't mean to use cheats, but to use the guides they have XDD
TV usually sucks, so I turn the console on because of that XD
Never tried dancing games O_o I mostly plat RPGs. Tactical RPGs are usually not my kind of game, but lately I'm discovering some are nice XD You should try Suikoden (any of the first 3)
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Was it only me but isn't he leaving sneakily and quietly that he uses unusual route to get out?
Anyway, I love that girl's design! Looks dynamic!
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I don't get it :/
Thank you ^^
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ow, I mean isn't he is trying to go out unnoticed that he woke up late and leave?
however, he is not even showing any reaction when he saw the girl, waking up at the same late hour passes him by,which is strange judging from the way he wanted to leave unnoticed.
Sorry if I write too much, but I can't help it in the net to comment on what I think is necessary -___-
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No, it's more that the subject suddenly struck his mind and he went for it. He's not hiding, and nobody stops him. And there's also a great reason for what I didn't add more people around to avoid confusion like yours: I was totally lazy
No, that's okay. I honestly didn't know what you meant at first. And I'm glad someone speaks their mind. This days I'm getting less comments (more faves, maybe, but less comments T_T )
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oh that's why... a good start for great story
less comments eh? I thought more people to watch means more people to comment... hmmm strange thing it is not related
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Seems not. Or maybe I upload so often that they feel lazy? O_o Is just curious.
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Nelia has got a very fun expression I really love it XD !!
Shen is so cute and innocent !
I just love your coloring so much !
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Thanks a lot ^_^
Shen looks innocent? really? XDD
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Shen <3 I think he's gonna be my fav character XD
Anyways, lovely colouring (yes I had to say it), I admire you for your patience to colour every page!
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Thank you so much
Well, there's only two charas, and Nelia is barely in, so not much to choose from XDDDDDD
XD Actually, the coloring didn't took as much as I though. Placing the patterns was the truly annoying part, but guess in the end I got the hang of it.
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You're welcome ^^
That doesn't really matter, he's a great chara anyways <3
And it was definetely worth it ^.^
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You're very welcome for proofreading. Again, I didn't need to correct you that much.
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With the little amount of text there were, I think the % of errors was high XD
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Lol, it wasn't that bad.
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Nelia looks to be quite an adorable character. She seems very innocent.
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Thank uoi
She is, but she's pretty smart too XDDD
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very nice page, I like the colouring style
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so much details~~~~auuugh how can you put so much effort in!!!!!!beautiful colors~~~~~
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Thank you so much
Well, I worked a lot for a while. And still, I left a few details undone XD But I like to work like this.
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but...but...but its so beautiful that i feel like crying~~~~ 8D
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XDDD Come on, now.... It's not THAT well XD
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but...but...it is!!!!dont argue with me cuz no one can win against me~~~mwahahaha~~~~~~ >
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shen is a chinese name right? εͺδΈδΈͺβshen βοΌ
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to tell you the truth, i did not thing of a chinese name, its just that the name flash trough my mind~~~~ 8D
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η₯~~
XDXD nah im sure he's not chinese XD
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lol lol i actually did think of this just now.but if it really is a chinese name it would be η³.
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