Comments: 8
Gaybreal5 [2010-02-01 07:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done !
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only-just [2008-03-09 23:42:31 +0000 UTC]
i dont think the legs are actualy that bad... but the butt and lower back seem off to me.. the butt seems a little squareish.... but idk : /
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violetice [2008-03-09 21:45:18 +0000 UTC]
wow, considering you're new to figure studies like these, you're doing a great job! I'm really impressed with the contrast in shading.
Going off what others have said--hip area definitely too narrow. Not only that, but the area where the right leg meets up with the hip needs to be defined--right now it's simply not there. The belly button is placed a bit too low (right now it's level with where the curve of the top of the right leg starts, and it should be a little higher). He doesn't have much of a butt, either--we should be able to see a little of it at this angle, but right now it looks like the back of the legs just connect directly to the hip with no butt in between.
Hope this helps!
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rell121 [2008-03-09 14:27:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm not an expert or anything either, but just eyeballing it, it seems like the hip/stomach area is too thin - I know that men have a slimmer hip area than women do, but this seems to thin in proportion to the rest of the body. The space between where the leg starts and the knee might be a little too short, but it's hard to tell - leg sizes are very hard for me and I usually end up cheating by adding baggy clothes.
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Soluwoniuk [2008-03-09 06:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Looks real good, I cant see anything wrong with it
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