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pokeybuns [2003-12-29 22:41:42 +0000 UTC]

The main guy looks sad... he needs to turn his frown upside down...

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artgyrl [2003-12-28 23:08:32 +0000 UTC]

looks like a kind of "day in the life" montage. that's the same guy in all four panels, right? once again, i can't get enough of the naturalness of your poses. i feel really relaxed when i look at your drawings for some reason.

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marioncobretti [2003-12-28 14:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I didn't know you could draw backgrounds. bwahaha.

Aside from that, I'd say that if you're going to do a page like that (with snippets from one guy's daily life), you need to either have dialogue in it or have other pages after it to make it clear what was going on. Either that or spread the proceedings out to mulitple pages and show transitions to and from each scene and have some establishing shots.

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glenneroo [2003-12-28 02:25:55 +0000 UTC]

oOOoOooOO i sooooooo love your sketches.... tho these are just randomly mixed up and there's no text or colors or nuttin, i just love your style, the shading and minute details all come together so nicely, amazing what just a regular #2 pencil can do er, this isn't a regular #2 pencil though, is it?

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