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Published: 2017-10-26 04:48:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 804; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description The diver blisters like wood
And falls apart
Kisses the froth
At the airline
And intimately
Splinters

Only rotten
Wood splits so
You decay
Into gossamer
As gravity and time
Spiral around
The sine of a spacetime clock

Water dilates
Gravity contracts
The diver
Penetrates
Flowering currents
Alone in depth
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Comments: 3

Zorbonaut [2017-10-26 10:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem! For some reason I would have preferred "alone in the deep".

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caerulex In reply to Zorbonaut [2017-10-26 15:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Believe it or not that what's I originally had 😄 I changed it to depth mainly because deep was exactly what I thought people would expect and thus wouldn't be as memorable 🤷‍♂️

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Zorbonaut In reply to caerulex [2017-10-26 17:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Subtle.

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