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burn-our-dough — TLGA3-28
Published: 2011-10-02 21:04:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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If someone could tell me what I did wrong with the perspective, I'd appreciate it.Related content
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I don't think there's anything wrong with the perspective here. You are wonderful with plying with dynamic poses and angles, which is always a treat to behold. This page is no different. I love seeing someone take complete control and fuck with the perspective like this.
I THINK there are two aspects of the page that make it appear like the perspective is off.
One is the broom in the bottom left corner of the first panel. It's not foreshortened enough and looks stubby instead of falling towards us.
Second is the impact of the mop hitting the dude's face. It's not painful enough and doesn't seem to show how hard he's been hit. I'm not sure how to fix that.
Bottom panel owns the bones.
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