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Published: 2003-10-01 02:55:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description Why do you think I even know where to begin?
By asking everything it doesn't mean you know how its going to end.
Just let this begin.
You can't know everything even if this test never ends.
I'm sick of everything having to be defined.
Every person being labeled and classified.
No ones ever left behind.
In this game of shards that will never end.
It just doesnt feel right.
I still feel like I'm bleeding inside.
It never stops.
It only drops from the inside of my mind.
And I never stop the hide.
"I'm fine" I say "life is great".
I'm almost full of hate.
I'm in this bind.
That is mine.
And a never untwined life at every time.
Whats the point of me living this life in so much of a bind?
Everyone has my life so far defined.
Or is it all in my mind?
I guess I lost my sight.
Of the fight.
That was never bright enough for my sight.    
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Comments: 11

ice-dite [2003-10-10 18:58:52 +0000 UTC]

this is really beautiful ... *re-reading it again*

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broke4ua In reply to ice-dite [2003-10-11 05:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for the comment I'm glad you liked it

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deadicedj [2003-10-03 23:58:25 +0000 UTC]

of course i liked it-it applies to my life. i see people with a clear view of who they are, a path that is known to them. i am like u in that poem. confused and full of the unknown.
fantastic piece of work. be proud of all the things u make. Y? cuz u made them and they are part of u. if u don't like them, u don't like part of urself.

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broke4ua In reply to deadicedj [2003-10-06 13:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Dude I dont like part of myself so..

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deadicedj In reply to broke4ua [2003-10-06 19:28:13 +0000 UTC]

DUDE!!!!!!!! u should like ur self. cuz if ur not happy with ur self, how can u be happy with anyone else. cheer up Amy. SMILE U!!!! or be poked.muahahaha

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broke4ua In reply to deadicedj [2003-10-06 20:01:57 +0000 UTC]

LOL I'm in a good mood bout everything but myself

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deadicedj In reply to broke4ua [2003-10-06 20:10:21 +0000 UTC]

love thy self as u love others. meowwww meow meoowwww!

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deadicedj [2003-10-01 23:09:48 +0000 UTC]

HOT DAMN. tha is good. glad to see u still can write so well. hehe. i feel the same. we in the same boat. never fear. my life is still blank too. and i don't even have a special person like a girlfriend to share it with. jus smile *HUG

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broke4ua In reply to deadicedj [2003-10-03 15:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for the comment steve. I dont think its that good but whatever. I'm surprised you actually like it

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radioPooh [2003-10-01 03:35:32 +0000 UTC]

sounds like a knot

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broke4ua In reply to radioPooh [2003-10-06 13:25:02 +0000 UTC]

thanx for viewing my page and poem.

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