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scorpion04 [2017-02-05 03:33:56 +0000 UTC]
Amazing
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Pearlbomber [2016-08-22 14:53:09 +0000 UTC]
Pearl- "Actually, that was more of a command; you're presence is defiling the sacred water!"
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ValianGuy [2014-10-22 17:04:59 +0000 UTC]
"modern greed" opens mouth. Shuts it.
"Yeah, but it's only going to get worse."
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ValianGuy In reply to Bowtothedrow [2014-10-25 10:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Litterally, if the dragons think this is bad then wait until the 22nd century. I bet ya there are going to be A LOT more cities in the randomness of places.
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khofer23 [2014-01-01 04:10:03 +0000 UTC]
are you doing any more commissions?
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daleksuprem [2013-08-30 17:45:44 +0000 UTC]
very nice dude i hop to see or read more like this in the futur
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-08-30 21:04:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I have an entire folder dedicated to stand-alone stories like this, in addition to those dedicated to my novels and the Holiday series. Feel free to check them out, if you have the time - I always love hearing feedback. And telling me what I've done right, what you want to see again, and what new material you would like to see added not only helps my creativity, but gives me a chance to write stories you personally want to see!
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-01 20:26:28 +0000 UTC]
if you have the time to help me i have a problem with on pf my short story i am writing that i will post on here i is my first on and i want it to be good could you help me if you have the time plz
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-01 20:48:41 +0000 UTC]
My schedule has been rather busy lately, so I can't sit down for extended periods and just shoot messages back and forth. I'm happy to help how I can, though: send me a note and, once or twice a day, I'll try to get back to you on any questions/concerns you have. Of course, I'll need to know the subject matter/genre of the work, and if you don't mind (provided I actually prove useful) I'd like a small footnote in the description saying, more or less, "Hey, helped a little bit..."
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-01 22:15:57 +0000 UTC]
In the next 24 bours or so check my junal on my account that will tell you what the stoy is and about ok talk later
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-01 23:15:38 +0000 UTC]
Alright... vague, but I get the general premise. What sort of help do you need? I'm afraid I can't dedicate copious amounts of time/resources to the project... but I can offer suggestions and knowledge I have gathered from my time writing here, and offer advice where you ask for it.
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-06 00:05:43 +0000 UTC]
The part i need help on is how i will get my mian person meet the dragon or drgons and what they will do with him when they fined him in his little hidy hoel
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-06 00:29:08 +0000 UTC]
Well the main issue will be doing something unique, painting a situation that doesn't appear 1,000 times in other stories with the same theme. Do a bit of brainstorming and come back to me with some out-of-the-box scenarios, and I'll help refine them. If I think of anything on my own, I'll let you know.
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-10 07:47:14 +0000 UTC]
He could foll him back to the cave to wach him and study tbe dragon or it could be the dragon waches the boy
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-10 21:26:14 +0000 UTC]
That could have some potential: the boy thinks he's spying on the dragon, and then the dragon turns the tables and reveals it to have been a ploy all along. Nice work with brainstorming!
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-12 12:43:22 +0000 UTC]
thanks what did you come up with In your brain storm
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-12 21:56:56 +0000 UTC]
All I seem to be able to think about are the things not to do: the stuff I've seen a thousand times. Just run something past me if it seems like a common concept.
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daleksuprem In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-09-13 09:55:00 +0000 UTC]
I get what you mean dud I had to cum up with an original plot when most have been used already
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Bowtothedrow In reply to daleksuprem [2013-09-13 12:23:12 +0000 UTC]
And you did a good job with it! I'll give you some feedback on the final piece when you have it; and if I need to come up with something else to help, let me know.
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Archsteel [2013-04-21 20:21:39 +0000 UTC]
I thought this was one of your good ones. Not your best, but I think you did a good job. As good a job as you usually do.
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Archsteel In reply to Bowtothedrow [2013-04-21 21:58:38 +0000 UTC]
Like I said earlier, I appreciate good literature.
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Dragondude97 [2011-12-13 00:23:34 +0000 UTC]
perfect story
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SheilasMeal [2011-12-11 23:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow great story. Faved!
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SheilasMeal In reply to Bowtothedrow [2011-12-12 02:56:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm working on a request story atm. I've spent most of the past couple of weeks working on requests.
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Bowtothedrow In reply to SheilasMeal [2011-12-12 04:02:20 +0000 UTC]
Ah I gotcha, that's perfectly understandable. I was just curious
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blanno97 [2011-12-11 22:43:31 +0000 UTC]
wow this is really nice and make it seem that fate really does exist
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blanno97 In reply to Bowtothedrow [2011-12-12 07:07:45 +0000 UTC]
welcome will you make a squal
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DragonBlade318 In reply to Bowtothedrow [2011-12-13 00:12:56 +0000 UTC]
Just make sure you don't catch sequel syndrome like Raging did.
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Kerugarn [2011-12-11 22:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Wow very nice job
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Bowtothedrow In reply to Kerugarn [2011-12-11 23:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And I got your request as well; it should make an excellent story
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