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Published: 2004-11-25 00:42:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description depression and understanding

cut so deep it didn't even bleed

Wanted nothing, got it all

a place on the other side

Love and lust are seperated by naught but a thin peice of mint flavoured dental floss.

a soul: broken, falling into the candyman's blood-filled hands

The want for one. The need for another. The bittersweet realization of having nothing more than what is there.

slipping into broken promises like stale cheese

An ulcer the size of kansas, a tumor shaped like montana

and their cries were never heard by him.

and his cries were never heeded by them

Finally the last gumdrop fell from the empty sheet above them

but the air was torn and shorn and ripped by the great maw of an oncoming fruitbat

all was dark in the wake of his terror

and the dragon at the edge of the world awoke with a scream that shattered billions of lives in a single moment

his last hope was lost; their lives the cost

and doom had come
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Comments: 9

soulcalibur20003 [2004-12-06 00:52:14 +0000 UTC]

dont worry about getting an opening line, its still good, and so i comment on the goodness of the greatness that is the blacher

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yekdorb [2004-12-04 12:52:56 +0000 UTC]

each line seems so individual, yet without each other, it wouldn't have half the impact it does. i liek the opposites, the bitter humor about things which you're not supposed to mention. . . i've missed your words.

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Jesu [2004-11-28 04:04:23 +0000 UTC]

*starts singing The Doors*

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dashboard-day [2004-11-25 16:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Its GREAT... stale cheese. lol

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rabid-hampster-vinny [2004-11-25 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]

WOW! ITS EXACTLY THE SAME!

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firesorceresschaotic [2004-11-25 01:33:39 +0000 UTC]

That's beautiful. I love the wording and the seeming randomness. Awesome!

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IshiRodosha [2004-11-25 01:06:10 +0000 UTC]

i hate dental floss it gets stuck in my teeth..............

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forgiver-03 [2004-11-25 01:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. Damn that dental floss. I taunts me, you know.
I like the odd language.

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forkkeeper [2004-11-25 00:45:34 +0000 UTC]

wonderful. Just plain wonderful.

Where the hell do we come up with this stuff?

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