hipEchick [2005-04-21 05:53:33 +0000 UTC]
I love the way it looks -- and the monochromatic colour scheme as well. AND the abstractedness!!!! Really neat idea. Critique: The spot where the roads intersect is one of the stronger spots that pulls your eye toward it, and you've got it very central. I can't really tell ya how I'd solve it... I guess I'd just make sure that all the stronger parts of the image are on dynamic thirds... one more thing -- in the top right-hand corner... the blue is pretty intense -- my eye goes there as well, at first... It's a good spot for a focal point, however, the problem with this part of the image is that it really leads my eye OUT of the picture... so to fix that, I'd put a shadow on the end of it -- a gradient, from dark dark blue to clear, just to soften the blow kind of... I'd do the same with the one on the bottom left-hand corner. They just really take my eye out of the image. You wanna keep it -in- the image! -- Andie
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