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Jinx05041 [2012-04-27 01:37:51 +0000 UTC]
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I really like how you did this. How you wrote their names, nicknames and years. You also really mixed up the traits for the kids, not having any one child look too much like just one of the parents.
The Shadows adds a nice contrast from the characters and the background.
I also love how well you did the details. The twins' hairstyles are very much alike but you can see differences, like there should e.
Anthony also has a little pacifier near him and his bear, something that I would personally overlook if I were to create something like this.
Emily and Eddy seem to be very close in hairstyles, and it's a unique, how they both have 'dad's' stray hair, though the color is slightly different.
I love that Eddy is the only one with 'mom's' beauty mark. I also just thought of this, is it possible the twins have pony tails like their dad?
Overall it's an amazing artwork, I think. Very Detailed, but not too much, ya know?
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KannaAsa [2018-12-02 20:28:27 +0000 UTC]
Several years later Eddy reminds me somehow of Adrien from Miracules Ladybugβ¦. must be the blond hair^^
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fmafan101 [2014-06-11 20:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Are u planning on doing one of these with mark and winryΒ
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filiafairy [2013-05-25 01:38:49 +0000 UTC]
I love the way the red hair contrasts with the golden eyes.
Whenever I see OC pairings that have children, I often wonder why they don't go as far back as like the grandparents traits.
It's completely obvious that Hohenheim's genes were dominant, but it'd just be nice to see like a splash of chestnut hair or emerald green eyes in a future child.
Damn science.
I still like this. It's absolutely adorable, your pairing is cayoooot~
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to filiafairy [2013-05-25 01:50:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I do too actually. :3
Ah well yes, his genes are dominant. I've always taken Xerxenian characters as similar to Ishvalans in that matter, they seem to have very strong genes. The reason you don't see that often though, is probably because it's hard to get away with that and still have the children look enough like their parents, this is particularly a problem with OcxCanon ships because people don't know the OC and its family by default like they would with canons. I did try different pallets for the kids here, but it just wasn't working. Tho, either way, I think Al is more likely to pass on his mother's genes. :3
Genetics were a bitch too XD
Thank :3
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filiafairy In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2013-05-25 02:34:25 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
Xerxenian and Ishvalan genes DEFINITELY are strong, but they're pretty so es okay.~
He does have the shape of his mother's eyes. Such a friendly warmth they give off :3
You're welcome again!
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LoveLiebAmor6 [2013-02-07 23:53:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh, dear Lord. They all got the antenna.
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AJInu-Okami [2013-01-08 04:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Aw~!
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KateElric [2012-10-31 03:28:21 +0000 UTC]
Trish? like Trisha Elric Ed's Mom... that's SOOO SWEEET!
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KateElric [2012-10-26 07:18:54 +0000 UTC]
i absolutely adore this pic
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Cessalina [2012-08-10 13:38:20 +0000 UTC]
With that many nice kids I wonder if their house looks like this: [link]
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231smarty [2012-07-31 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]
What a cute family! ^_^
Trish and Angie remind me of Ami and Mami Futami from Idolm@sters!
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spiralmaestro [2012-07-30 12:37:38 +0000 UTC]
awesome job!
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trossidevil [2012-07-30 11:34:09 +0000 UTC]
awww the whole family so cute... damn did mum and dad get busy.
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fireandwaterqueen [2012-07-20 03:51:34 +0000 UTC]
aww they are too cute..I;d have to say that Eddy and Anthony are my favorite
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Koichi-Chan [2012-05-08 20:05:06 +0000 UTC]
What I like so much about EdPriss is, how natural their relationship is. The same for EdJen. I think that you and created very unique and nice characters with another personality like Ed's. I'm just sick of many OCs who are just genderbended Eds and selfinserts.
But now for the picture ^^
The children have all something of both parents, that's great. They also seems to be very unique characters ^^ The colouration is also beautiful as always *.*
P.S. Please let me give a hug to Anthony, he's so adowable :3
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WhiteFlowerKanga [2012-04-22 11:43:26 +0000 UTC]
I really like this! But, whenever I envisioned Ed having kids I thought he would name his first daughter Trisha after his mother. I really like how you drew Eddy very handsome. Emily is lovely, she looks like such a pretty girl, and such a drama queen. The twins are so cute, they take after their mother a lot. Baby Anthony is so~ adorable. And of course Edward and Priscilla, love it! In my opinion Priscilla is better for Ed because with Winry it just seemed wrong. Like incest or something. Don't get me wrong I love a good EdxWin fanfiction just as much as the next girl but if you think about it..... *shudder*. I just love your OC and I hope I can get a Tablet soon so I can start on my own. Also, I love the whole WinxMark thing! He seems Perfect for her! keep doing what you do! :3
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ReignofDarkRose [2012-04-19 22:31:16 +0000 UTC]
I just noticed that the mother's traits are much stronger than the father's.
adorable children though! ^w^ ~<3
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xMystery21x [2012-04-05 06:09:57 +0000 UTC]
awww very cute :3
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YunaKasune [2012-03-31 19:06:35 +0000 UTC]
-Rewind- *At computer* Okay! Time to check up Priscy's work!~ |3 *Picture pops up**spots Emily* oHo .... *Rolls chair back**looks in mirror* oHo.... *determined face* If I grow my hair longer I shall look like her! That shall be my new goal! *spins on chair laughing like an idiot*
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YunaKasune In reply to YunaKasune [2012-03-31 19:08:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh. An Eddy's just as cute as ever~
I absolutely love his curly hair~, I could just spend hours playing with it~
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to D-Thessy [2012-03-25 21:47:30 +0000 UTC]
Enrealidad no es tan diferente del original, quiza mas brillante. Es el tono que se llama "strawberry blonde" aun no entra en rojo. o3o/ ... pero si Emily ya los tenia azules en las primeras refs y pics que subi... y bueno porque le iba a meter un tono claro de dorado pero Nova y yo no nos poniamos de acuerdo.
XDDD Dicen que las madres siempre saben distinguir a sus gemelos, y bueno eso si que llevan el flequito de lados opuestos ademas del color de la ropa.
LOL Verdad? XD
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Deus-Lux [2012-03-24 09:53:28 +0000 UTC]
Cute, well done.
Anthony does look a bit like Gaara from Naruto, colour-wise. *shot*
They look so cute! :3
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tansyuduri [2012-03-22 17:10:20 +0000 UTC]
I really like some of the designs I like emily's especily it looks very original
Hmmmm I'd throw in a few more traits not seen in ed or Priscilla and maybe go with a different name for Eddy
But it looks good overall.
Oh wait... your not in my group anymore I'm not supposed to critique right?
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-22 17:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Adding traits not seen in them will result in the kids not looking like they are theirs. Some of the girls tried this and it didn't go well. The thing with designing fanchildren is that you have to stick to the looks of their parents but still make them look different, which is the difficult part.
I'm sticking to his name, I know a good deal of Ed's fankids are named after him so it's overdone, but I like it, and I could see it happening in the canon... also, going by Eddy will never be as bad as going by Ed Jr.
"Oh wait... your not in my group anymore I'm not supposed to critique right?"
What is that at the end supposed to mean if you post this anyways? It just sounds incredibly stupid...
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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-22 20:25:08 +0000 UTC]
I dont think it would nessasarily do that Ed and Alphonse still look like they belong to their parents
ok
It means I am asking in an indirect way if i am aloud to critique you
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-22 20:47:56 +0000 UTC]
Ed and Al are only get traits from them, especially with their original color palettes and in the first series Al's color palette is only darkened due to Trisha's genes, like with Eddy's hair here. In the manga they both have the same shade of golden hair and eyes. Ed gets his looks right from Hoho and Al gets more traits from Trisha, like his eyes. Even if they had unique traits, they're canon characters, and people will not question this, they just know who their parents are, it's different with fanchildren because people don't know these characters, so who their parents are has to show.
It sounds rather sarcastic, even aggressive, I wouldn't word things like that.... and what stops you? Although there's really no info on these kids here yet. These are just the final designs.
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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-22 22:04:16 +0000 UTC]
yes but they don't look substantially like either of the parents. hair is very diferant for one not just in color. but its just an example. its your chice do do what you want. I just thinking throwing a few more things to differentiate the twins or eye colors might be interesting.
I didn't mean to sound like that sorry and ok
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-22 22:18:40 +0000 UTC]
Ed's identical to young Hoho... and you're talking about hairstyles... and even with these Ed and Al still get similar hair, if Trisha had short hair it would look similar to Al's.... which isn't exactly a good thing, but yeah just explaining that.
I've even played around with hair textures with these kids. Eddy's hair is a strawberry blonde color and it's wavy like his mother's but it has his father's texture.
Emily has her mother's texture but her dad's color, her eyes are a mix of both and they're blue like her mother's.
The twins have straight hair like Ed's but with more volume like Priss's, their mom's hair color and eye shape and dad's eye color.
Tony has Ed's eye shape but blue eyes and straight hair like Ed's but red, not exactly his mother's shade, it's lighter but yeah.
Differentiate the twins? They're identical twins not fraternal twins, they're supposed to be identical, the way to tell who is who is with their bangs and the colors they wear. They get different hairstyles when they get to their teens though, but little twins are usually like this.
I get what you mean with the mixing, and many things were considered, the kids have been extremely hard to design, I've been working on this for a year. We tried golden eyes on Emily, but we wanted a different shade, it just didn't work, in the end these were the designs we picked, and there's a reason for everything.
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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-22 22:30:16 +0000 UTC]
I like eddy;s design and emilysa a lot'
Mabye you could give the twins a different bang style?
I meant to differentiate from their parents not each other
Emily's eyes are very nice in blue.
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to tansyuduri [2012-03-22 22:38:29 +0000 UTC]
... but they have the most original/different bangs along with Tony... Emily's bangs are similar to her mom's and Eddy's to his dad's.
It's probably the nice blue-golden contrast. It bugs me when people ask if she's Winry's even if Winry's eyes are way darker tho.
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tansyuduri In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-23 16:27:52 +0000 UTC]
theres just somthing about them that reminds me of pricilla
she doesnt look like winry at all
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to DragonKnightMirren [2012-03-21 23:26:43 +0000 UTC]
XD I know, but Ed is said to have a big family in Chronicles, so even if he's with Priss and not Winry here, Priss loves children, so I thought a big family made sense in this case too.
XDDD Big family can mean lots of things yes.
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DragonKnightMirren In reply to Bitter-Cherry [2012-03-22 14:55:31 +0000 UTC]
"Chronicles"? Even so, I did figure that.
Yeah, more than anything a whole of giving birth and screaming (from both parents and children).
Funny avatar, BTW.
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xxminixkittyxx [2012-03-20 23:03:26 +0000 UTC]
At least we know now who Ed married in the real world!
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Bitter-Cherry In reply to xxminixkittyxx [2012-03-21 00:22:54 +0000 UTC]
This isn't official, they're all my fan character, for a story a share with 2 of my friends. Winry's with other guy too, there are some pictures of him in my gallery, his name is Mark.
And I didn't mean to scare you with my other replies, I was very impulsive when I first thought you were flaming.
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trezilla [2012-03-20 22:54:41 +0000 UTC]
I took a very quick look at this and I thought Eddy was playing with Emily's hair. X3
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