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xprojectd24 [2010-07-20 13:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! I would work on the color of the fish a bit. Right now the whole piece looks a bit monotone. Try changing the fish to a bright orange (leave a hint of blue in there to create cohesion). This will draw the eye to the fish, which I assume is the focal, and will make the piece way better. Keep up the good work!
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bioxyde In reply to xprojectd24 [2010-07-21 15:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the critique, and after checking the deviation a while, I agree with you. I'll try it.
Also, if I do that, do you think I should submit a new deviation or just edit the file of this one?
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xprojectd24 In reply to bioxyde [2010-07-21 21:46:27 +0000 UTC]
I would submit a new deviation and link to the original.
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bioxyde In reply to xprojectd24 [2010-07-21 21:57:00 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I'll try to change the color and if I do a good job I'll post it here at deviantART.
Thanks for helping.
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Dzwonek [2010-07-20 13:38:46 +0000 UTC]
wooow! It's big!
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bioxyde In reply to Dzwonek [2010-07-21 15:08:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you...I guess. Lol.
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