queenoftheoutlands [2009-03-14 09:36:53 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. I Quite liked the shift in narrative style actually, it made it a bit more... abstract
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BeeZeroOne In reply to queenoftheoutlands [2009-03-15 20:27:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
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ublotters [2009-03-11 20:50:11 +0000 UTC]
Very intresting thought flow, I like how you tried to get a feel for a cyborg, something that we as humans can't relate too
BeeZeroOne In reply to ublotters [2009-03-12 11:49:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comments