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Basic-Hedgehog — The Last Goodbye

Published: 2009-07-24 00:02:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 5236; Favourites: 135; Downloads: 76
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Description I'm probably not going to finish the Beginning part 3, because I don't feel like inviting more unwanted critique on myself. I'm not a good writer, but dammit I try.

Following my last image, I figured I should explain Rosie being Base's adoptive mother, by showing that part of the story.

Now...OMG I DREW KISSING!

It's hard to draw that, so I don't much.

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Charles ran into the small hut after Rosie and the kids, slamming the door shut and throwing his weight against it, searching for something to bar it off with, finding nothing.

"Charles..." Rosie's voice came up, the children were holding onto her dress, looking to him with fear and confusion,"...we're trapped."

Charles was across the room in a moment, patting along the wall,"Don't forget I helped design the escape routes for the royal family...I didn't lead you here to die in a corner."

His hand pressed a spot on the fireplace, a stone pressed in, making a click, the wall slid up,"It only stays open for a minute, everyone in, this'll lead you to Knothole, its a safe place in the forest, there's a pre-made village there in case we had lost the war."

The children ran past him, Sonic stopping at his feet looking up,"Uncle Chuck...where's Base?"

Charles looked to Rosie, then at Sonic, crouching down he put his hands on Sonic's little shoulders,"Listen to me Sonny boy...the girls are going to need someone to protect them in Knothole, you're gonna have to do that for me, ok?"

"But aren't you coming?"

"No, Sonny, I'm going to stay and try and stop Julian. If I succeed, I'll come get you all, ok?"

Sonic nodded, Charles could see the fear in his eyes. He gave Sonic a hug,"Don't worry, I'll be careful."

Sonic took a step back, waving slowly,"Be cool, unc."

With that Sonic ran down the hallway to keep up with the others, as far as they'd gone at least.

Charles stood, looking to Rosie, who by far had the most worry in her expression,"Take care of them."

"Charles...this is suicide."

"I have to buy you some time...I'm partially to blame for this, its only right I try and stop it...and...Base is out there somewhere, I have to look."

Rosie nodded, her eyes glossing over with tears she was holding back,"...be careful Charles...bring him back, and bring yourself back too."

Charles nodded, their gaze met, a familiar feeling of butterflies mixed with a sense of worry. Charles lowered his head,"I can only do what I can."

"We'll see eachother again."

Rosie stepped past him, her pace quick, so he wouldn't see her tears, she felt a grip on her arm pull her back, into Charles embrace, and felt his lips touch hers, the tears fell freely down her cheeks. The kiss lasted a moment, but to them it seemed to last forever, and yet, ended too soon.

She stepped backward through the entrance as it began to close, her bottom lip trembling, trying not to sob as he slowly was taken from her sight,"...I love you, Sir Charles Hedgehog."

Charles smiled, the doorway closed, he turned slowly pulling a series of throwing needles from his pouch. The door blew off the hinge, in a moment he was surrounded by Swat Bots.

They ordered him to freeze, their monotone voices like nails on a chalkboard. He took a deep breath, and tossed the first pin, his fight for Mobotropolis, for his family, for the future began.

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Comments: 86

EDBV [2015-09-04 00:53:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this ship, it's sweet!

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TheAtaerraVoltArtist [2015-07-07 22:10:26 +0000 UTC]

I never thought of this ship! I love it!😆

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Sonic-fan17 [2015-06-22 19:02:38 +0000 UTC]

This' so sweet and I love the story for this moment

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ameliathebat [2012-09-18 21:04:53 +0000 UTC]

pliz tell me this is not sonic pliz!!! and i love how you draw!!!

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ameliathebat [2012-09-18 21:11:38 +0000 UTC]

Its Chuck and Rosie. Thanks. :3

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ameliathebat In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2012-09-18 21:20:35 +0000 UTC]

ooops sorry thats really good cause i hate sonally...

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ameliathebat [2012-09-18 23:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, afraid I don't. I'm really not opposed to any pairings really, I just have ones I prefer.

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ameliathebat In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2012-09-18 23:48:54 +0000 UTC]

ah thats great and um.....isnt chuck sonic's dad?

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ameliathebat [2012-09-19 01:30:05 +0000 UTC]

Uncle in both SatAM and the Archie Comics. The two differ greatly so they're sort of classified as separate universes.

In both, Chuck is his uncle.

In Archie Jules Hedgehog is Sonic's dad.

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ameliathebat In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2012-09-19 11:57:00 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thnxs!! god ur smart when it comes to this!!!

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Louis-the-Hedgehog [2012-09-02 13:57:13 +0000 UTC]

They do wed eventually, right? Because if they do, guess who is next in line.

If only...

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dadu79 [2012-02-21 16:35:06 +0000 UTC]

...could this be and old version of sonic and sally? 8D *shot*

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to dadu79 [2012-02-21 18:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Noooooooo

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dadu79 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2012-02-21 18:46:18 +0000 UTC]

yeeeeeeeeeeees, what if sonic and sally find out? XDD

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ThermidorResistance [2012-02-12 04:43:20 +0000 UTC]

I love the raw emotion of this! SO WELL DONE!

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ThermidorResistance [2012-02-13 10:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. :3

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fansonic15 [2011-07-30 18:02:13 +0000 UTC]

love the story and love the drawing ^^
they look so cute together

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to fansonic15 [2011-07-31 00:58:10 +0000 UTC]

THanks. :3

Yeah, they do look good together. :3

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fansonic15 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2011-08-01 14:08:03 +0000 UTC]

^^

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sonic-fan-girl769 [2011-06-25 03:54:01 +0000 UTC]

lol awsome i had a feeling that rosie and chuck loved eatch other <3

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to sonic-fan-girl769 [2011-06-25 22:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Well, even in the comic that's canon, but I liked the idea when I was a kid first. XD

So I decided,"Why not? Pair them in my stories."

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laserx5 [2010-11-29 09:31:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice job.

Ken Penders was planning to a comic issue of these 2 dating.

While he was a lousy writer, I was curious how he would have written it.

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to laserx5 [2010-11-30 12:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

Hm, really? Odd.

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laserx5 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2010-11-30 22:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Yea, I know.

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AriTeir [2010-10-07 02:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Amazing work! loved the story and the picture and more than anyhting, Rosie/Chuck!

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to AriTeir [2010-10-07 05:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^^

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jayfoxfire [2010-08-31 06:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I admit it, when I look at this again, Its indeed cute

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to jayfoxfire [2010-08-31 11:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. :3

Even if it is a little sad too. XD

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Tigershard-R [2010-07-22 06:12:00 +0000 UTC]

Rosie and Chuck have always been a potential couple imo. There were hints about it in one old Sonic comic.

I hope Archie Comics can take advantage of that one day...

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jayfoxfire In reply to Tigershard-R [2010-08-31 06:33:05 +0000 UTC]

which issue? Oo

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Tigershard-R In reply to jayfoxfire [2010-08-31 07:06:25 +0000 UTC]

144

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Tigershard-R [2010-07-22 06:33:57 +0000 UTC]

That's kinda the way I saw it, except I watched the tv show and thought,"Hm..."

Then later on I found out about that comic.

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RamonetB [2010-06-23 15:36:27 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful!
I always felt like something could be there between the two of them. Just.. FELT it.

Great story, too! Such tragedy.

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to RamonetB [2010-06-24 00:11:54 +0000 UTC]

Well then, I suppose the subtle and not so subtle hints worked out well. ^^

Ah yes, Base's life is a series of tragedies that will inevitably effect all who get close, but perhaps someday, the leather clad lancer might find a wee bit of happiness. XD

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ZephyrTheKid [2010-01-26 03:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Dude, I was flippin' out 'cause I thought this was Base and Rosie...

"Omgwtfbbq incest?!" Is what was running through my mind

I sighed the biggest sigh of relief when I saw that mustache XP

But seriously, I love this piece and the backstory!

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to ZephyrTheKid [2010-01-26 12:59:52 +0000 UTC]

It technically wouldn't be incest, she's a foster parent, but it'd still be kinda creepy.

Hehe...bbq.

Mustache of Relief?XD

Thanks. ^^

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Cake-the-Crab [2009-10-30 21:17:05 +0000 UTC]

I think someone used the word "riveted?" It is so riveting! Absolutely beautiful pic, and brilliant little tale attached. It's very good, you musn't be so critical of yourself. It felt like I could be reading this in Sonic comic book. Keep at it - this stuff rocks!

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Cake-the-Crab [2009-10-30 22:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. ^^

Guess that'd make this the best piece I've written really. XD

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Cake-the-Crab In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-10-31 06:44:22 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome very much.

I wouldn't know because I haven't read any of your other work. XD Do you have any other written pieces posted?

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Cake-the-Crab [2009-10-31 11:32:35 +0000 UTC]

Somewhere in my gallery are "The Beginning" parts 1 and 2, which both apparently suck according to one reader.

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Cake-the-Crab In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-11-14 22:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'll see about that.

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Cake-the-Crab [2009-11-14 23:45:35 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps.

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Sparklycupcake23 [2009-09-04 22:21:08 +0000 UTC]

i like amy with sonic better

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Sparklycupcake23 [2009-09-04 22:53:48 +0000 UTC]

That's Rosie and Chuck. Not Sonic and Sally.

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Sparklycupcake23 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-09-05 00:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow they look the same LMAO but i hate sally srry

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Sparklycupcake23 [2009-09-05 11:31:46 +0000 UTC]

They truly do in some ways. Well that's your decision. I don't hate either Sally or Amy, I do hate what Amy became, she went from innocent youth to being what I hate. The dreaded MALL GIRL. EWWWWW!

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Sparklycupcake23 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-09-06 23:27:53 +0000 UTC]

i know amy she not really a mall girl Amy, well yeah she kinda more mean but thats sonics fault for being aloof he cuased her to turn to wat she is now She not my fav. character though

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Basic-Hedgehog In reply to Sparklycupcake23 [2009-09-06 23:48:37 +0000 UTC]

She is, in SA 1 she went shopping, she obsesses over fashion and such, she's a mall girl. Sonic didn't cause her to turn that way, SEGA chose to do that.

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Sparklycupcake23 In reply to Basic-Hedgehog [2009-09-07 02:17:11 +0000 UTC]

They made the sonic character do it
Amy used to be my favorite i didnt know she was a mall obsesd girl im still gonna deny that anyways

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CiNnAmOn-HeDgEhOg [2009-08-24 00:33:11 +0000 UTC]

D: So adorablllle!!! <33333 I think it's a fantastic picture, AND nice story. ^^ *claps* I'm actually more of a writer than an artist, and your writing skills are great. ^^ I think you're better than most of the people critiquing you. >>; They're just jealous, maybe? XD *my answer for everything, jealousy?* XP

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