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b-e-c-k-y — Take It In

Published: 2005-06-02 02:53:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 8807; Favourites: 269; Downloads: 1313
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Description A gesture for color

Standing here on the sidewalk, she sees
the horizon as a series of dull gray
scraping the almost-raining sky.

There is where the steady pattern of windows
are clear yet worn from not being used,
from not being looked-out of.

When everything is blank—a clean slate—is
how it all begins. Then a trace, an outline, that stays.
What the root begins, the fruit ends. A violet

that is not quite violet yet
supple in the light which is created.
Its sheen—proof of the fruit's juice
where the light is seen but left out.

She enters what she creates. Here,
staring at the fruit she colors a not-so-violet,
staring at the root that catches.

She picks the fruit and takes it in. She cannot be
without taking it in. And just as she closes her eyes

she opens them to the horizon—
to the landscape without fruit—and is

full. Here, she spits out the seeds
to plant them in the concrete
where roses, once believed, could grow.

For the mind sees the horizon before the first step
and here is everywhere she can change.

for Becky
by Kokoy Guevarra

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a new ID. a new image. a new phase in my life.
i was lucky to have my good friend Kokoy make a poem about this picture.
Kokoy's one of the most brilliant Literature students in Ateneo. got invited to be a professor as soon as he graduated.
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Comments: 138

solist [2005-06-02 21:57:20 +0000 UTC]

wow!

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Juny [2005-06-02 20:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Those grapes aren't really there? Awesome!

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savetheduck In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 17:12:06 +0000 UTC]

that is really awesome!

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singingforlife In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 15:11:42 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, i like how the hair color matches the grapes.

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to singingforlife [2005-06-02 16:00:53 +0000 UTC]

aw thanks! yeah my original idea was to feature my new hair (never dyed it before) with some sort of object that had the same color. then the picture took a life of its own when the shot was done. wires were done in post. shhh. hehe

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singingforlife In reply to b-e-c-k-y [2005-06-02 23:39:39 +0000 UTC]

awsome. it worked out great!

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serdarb [2005-06-02 13:53:11 +0000 UTC]

it is an excellent shot toning is great lighting is great
great great
looks so elegant

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to serdarb [2005-06-02 16:01:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much, i'm honored

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serdarb In reply to b-e-c-k-y [2005-06-02 17:41:46 +0000 UTC]

i am saying what i see

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BoNa-FidE [2005-06-02 13:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful. The wires, the grapes, the outfit.. it's all so amazing. I it

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brettbash In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 13:12:20 +0000 UTC]

great picture. love it.

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pearwood In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 11:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Becky,
Lovely poem, lovely drawing, lovely lady. Thanks for seeing the beauty even before it exists, and bringing it to life for us.
Steve

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to pearwood [2005-06-02 16:02:57 +0000 UTC]

haha oh wow, thanks.. i'm really glad you appreciate it.
i knoww. the poem.. i keep reading it again and again i can't get enough of it actually. i should print it out and frame i think. i've never had a , well ,REAL poem written for me before. so it's awesome. thanks

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homegrownsmoke [2005-06-02 09:09:32 +0000 UTC]

very nice indeed!

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pinakaguwaping In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 08:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I especially like the red higlights on your hair and on the grapes.

Kokoy? Football team Kokoy? He's going to be WHAT?!?!

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to pinakaguwaping [2005-06-02 11:46:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks man. that's right foo he's gonna be a teacherrrrr
oh the poor souls that will be brought into the verbal slaughterhouse.. i can just imagine them now. haha. no no

kokoy's awesome man he really stepped up in lit and all the lit professors totally look up to him. who would've thought right?

ablang's gonna teach too. teach kids. now THAT's hell right there. poor souls.

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pinakaguwaping In reply to b-e-c-k-y [2005-06-03 03:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Ablang teach kids!? Now that's something I have to see.

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CaroleHumphreys In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 08:12:05 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful!!! I thought it was a painting at first.

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ravivasavan In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 07:50:45 +0000 UTC]

it is just so beautiful not just the model - the techinical, the environment, the lighting! so amazing, great overall

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manaxmomo In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 07:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Gosh!
Again, this wire thing! I LOVE this!!!
The grapes are so beautiful.. and you..
And the flying foulard..
Looks like a lot of work!! But it was all worth it, let me tell you
The longer I look (stare) at it, the more I like it!
Your hair and the red/black grapes go so well together...

can I give two s ? please!

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to manaxmomo [2005-06-02 11:55:54 +0000 UTC]

hahaha awww thanks so much!
yeah it took so long to make! started off as a shoot to celebrate my new hair (because i haven't chopped it that short for almost 10 years, damn...) and then i felt it should be more meaningful. so the wires came in.

lemme just tell you, those wires were hell. it's like a major puzzle. the shoot alone was tricky since it reflects light pretty easily. and cutting them out one by one. goodness. buuut i mean i'm happy with how it came out, so thanks so much for appreciating it

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manaxmomo In reply to b-e-c-k-y [2005-06-02 16:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, now I get how you made the wire
I first thought you made them on the computer(and had no idea how ). Wow, but shooting them and insterting them afterwards, that indeed sounds tricky. But you managed it, even the shadows fit exactly. Are the grapes .. "real", too?

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indorock In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 07:45:03 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhh to be that silk cloth

the work you put into this, from conceptualization, putting up with the difficult shoot al by yourself, and the crazy hours spent with PS, and to see this amazing finished product....you embody the spirit of an artist and of what i love about DA Not to mention, how gooooood this is to look at . So delish, and i'm not just talking about the grapes

good job sweety

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to indorock [2005-06-02 13:40:31 +0000 UTC]

mmm you being the silk cloth? hehe. hmmm

thanks sweetie that means a lot to me. and yeah. you're the only one that's actually seen the progress of this thing, and i knew that if it passed you then i was on the right track.

thanks so much mark.. sigh.

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xECLAIRx In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 07:31:41 +0000 UTC]

p.s. you should definitely make this a print

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xECLAIRx [2005-06-02 07:27:39 +0000 UTC]

good god becky this is stunning and i LOVE your hair! i must fav now

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to xECLAIRx [2005-06-02 16:04:16 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks i'm so that you like this one. i'm really honored. thanks for the

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blue-violet In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 06:15:23 +0000 UTC]

amazing. only you could have such an artistic Id! I looks so realistic how you're holding the grapes! Were they added in later or did you just make them look shiny! argh! i can'r tell you how coo, this is! Like your new haircut and dye! It did look so pretty long n brown though!

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theshadowinverts [2005-06-02 05:02:04 +0000 UTC]

composition wise is great...the picture so as the poetry....another best pieces from you.... i can say

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hunny21 In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 04:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! A total

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lanceledesma In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 04:32:15 +0000 UTC]

probably one of the best i've seen from you. i love the poem as well. just a question tho...is this you?

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b-e-c-k-y In reply to lanceledesma [2005-06-02 04:46:58 +0000 UTC]

yup lance that's meee.
had to take the shot with the timer. quite difficult i must say. hehe

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lanceledesma In reply to b-e-c-k-y [2005-06-02 08:38:27 +0000 UTC]

You know, bex. I just can't imagine how you made this...hmm whats the term..surreal?..
Just like your other submissions...I know it's a photograph..but somehow it looks more like a painting. hay...galing!

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solitaryecho In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 04:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Its the wires! You're getting better and better.

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00025 In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 03:14:21 +0000 UTC]

hmm looks grapes..I mean great!

Thar goes the wires again! Me likey!

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Ryochi In reply to ??? [2005-06-02 03:06:53 +0000 UTC]

very nice
both poetry and the piece

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funkeymunkey17 [2005-06-02 02:54:21 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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