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Published: 2014-02-09 14:02:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1424; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 7
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Commission for anzichan Thank you so much for commissioning me
I hope you're satisfied with how this turned out and I also hope your friend, the owner of this character, likes it too
It was fun to draw
Character (c) Jolly-Jessie
Art ~meh
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Comments: 29
It's very cool and great!! ;w;
I hope I can make BG like you ;w;
and detailed shade...
OMGOMGOMG
and people to commish...//no
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heheh thank you verys much dear
If you practice a bit, you'll surely be able to do a BG and shade like this, it's not that hard
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Really? Thanks back, ma'am X3
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though daj ti si umjetnica, opali koju opomenu 
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OH wow this is amazing!
I love the beautiful anime style shading! The pose and dynamic flow of the hair! That background is beautiful!
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Ah thank you
but I actually had pose and background references, so it's not that impressive
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Your welcome!!
OH that is fine! I use references too! Some people still can't pull it off though!!
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wow this is great!
I like the whole composition
and the finishing touch like the windows and blue leaves in the BG being sort of glowing makes this feel more epic.
yet there's still something that I think could be done better, like the highlight shading.
the highlight on her left arm looks fine but on her right arm, IMHO it looks a bit too thick, maybe you could thin it out a bit, especially the highlight on her elbow and lower arm, in fact I think it would look better if the highlight on her lower arm be in the up side of the arm not the bottom (I hope you get what I means). And I think the highlight on her braids looks a bit too plain, why not play a bit with the highlight shapes?
well that's some thing I could point to, I said it as a fellow artist, let's improve
it's so hard to find the right word to express what I meant, my english suck
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Awwwww thank you soooo much for this honest critique! I really, really appreciate it very very much
It's so cool to see what other people think and it helps me a lot 
Now what I find quite interesting is that actually after submiting it here and looking at it a while more I thought that the highlight on the left arm was off and too thick and that I should've made it a bit thinner in the lowest half of the visible arm 
well it's my first time doing shading with lightsource from the back, so I can't truly say what's right or wrong, therefore thank you very much for pointing me on it
and as you guessed right, I was quite unsure how to highlight the braid, it just didn't look well to me, no matter what I did
Do you perhaps have any suggestions how to make it better?
And thank you, thank you, thank you once again! Your thoughts mean so much to me
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wait, do we have the same perception of right-left here? by "her right arm" I meant the arm that is bend and fully visible.
I want to suggest something, but I don't think I could explain it.
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yeah, we have the same perception of right-left
hahaha lol well... you can draw it out if that'd be easier for you than explaining
but I think you should have more confidence in you english and explanations... I was able to understand everything you meant up until now
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ah not really... reference this, reference that... kad imaš reference za sve onda je lako
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ma vraga je lako, divim ti se
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ma deh... nemaš se čemu divit, nije to ništa.... joj moram još ono tebi nacrtat i flashu sam nešto obećala i mami i sebi bi htjela nešto, a ljudi ovdje me neće ostavit na miru, a meni teško odbit, pa nikako da išta uspijem... samo se gomilaju ideje
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pa nemoras odbit, samo malo produzis rok pa prije svoje nacrtas a onda njihovo
i divit cu se i dalje *pih*
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looool onda bi ljudi čekali 3 mjeseca, a to nema smisla
kyah jeez... do what ya want
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ah i will you know i will
pa neka cekaju
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Dear! You did a superb job!! Absolutely gorgeous!! You're amazing! Thank youuuu!
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Yaaaaay! I'm so glad I was able to meet your expectations!
Heheh you're amazing as well and thank youuuuu
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OH MY DEAR LORD! THIS IS SO AWESOME!
She looks so badass and pretty !!!
Thankyou so much, it's very beautifull!
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Myaaaa you're very welcome and I'm really happy to hear that you like it
Though your friend was the one to order this, so she's the one most responsible for it
She came up with the whole idea, gave me references and I just followed her instructions as she said
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Heeehee, she is so sweet ^,^
And so are you, thank you for drawing her so cool!!
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Yeah, I also found it very sweet
No problem, it was my pleasure
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