GerryIsNear [2012-11-12 05:23:07 +0000 UTC]
Nice piece. I like the general feel of it. In terms of composition though, the emptiness of the bottom left corner bothers me a bit. I'd also diversify the color palette a bit. The cloud thing in the back looks a bit strange to me; it needs to stand out less.
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debie-chan [2012-11-10 17:46:11 +0000 UTC]
The concept is really interesting...
I didn't liked the shading very much, though. The technique is good, but the color palette is too yellow and black, and this might be just a preference of mine, but they are not really good colors to shade with in my opinion :C
Maybe you could try using some blue hues, and cream instead of yellow, I think it would look better...
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