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Aremke — Salute pre-sketch
Published: 2006-01-01 17:38:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 50
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I'm posting this one, to show I'm actually still drawing and two, to get pointers. Something's not quite right with this... can anybody help me out before I go and ink it?Anyway, in case you're wondering, they're holding up lighters like at a rock concert...I'll draw that better for the final draft.
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The girl on the lefts face seems to be too round. But this is really good! Love the expressions of the guys... XD
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Nice. I like to see it inked and colored though.
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Hmm it all looks pretty good to me. The proportions of each figure are spot on and I like the unique angle you've chosen. I think perhaps it's the scale of the gals that might be bothering you? They seem a tad big compared to their onlookers...but that's not really all that noticeable. Perhaps adding background elements and shading will help to smooth out the composition for you?
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Yamcha and Barracks are kinda funny here. 
Otherwise, I see nothing wrong with this. Looks alright w/me.
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