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Published: 2012-10-06 15:15:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 3772; Favourites: 225; Downloads: 250
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Description Just a lil' bit o' practice, tried out shading and stuff.
Please tell me what you think, point out everything that looks wrong, everything that looks right, critique the crap out of it!
But don't critique the boots... or the crown. I know they aren't right x3
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aperfecta In reply to ??? [2013-07-23 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^-^

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MissFlight [2012-11-03 15:51:33 +0000 UTC]

All that hair! o3o Wow...well, the only thing that comes to mind that could use some work is her skinny rear leg that is, for whatever reason, stretched out. Maybe she is doing her morning exercise, I dunno. x3

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aperfecta In reply to MissFlight [2012-11-03 16:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you *U*
I know of her skinny rear leg TT^TT But I laughed at the 'morning exercises' thing x3
It was kind of just practice, kind of disappointing when I've drawn a lot better ponies but this is the one that gets all of the 'loves' or whatever~
Ah heck, I'll stop complaining now x3 Sorry!

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NotActive002 [2012-10-19 00:53:19 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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aperfecta In reply to NotActive002 [2012-10-19 01:14:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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stickman00 [2012-10-13 17:34:37 +0000 UTC]

"alright, breath and concentrate on a center point"

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aperfecta In reply to stickman00 [2012-10-13 21:51:54 +0000 UTC]

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stickman00 In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-14 02:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Then Luna makes some noise and disturbs her

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aperfecta In reply to stickman00 [2012-10-14 14:43:55 +0000 UTC]

0.0

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ZeldaTheSwordsman [2012-10-10 10:03:20 +0000 UTC]

The crown's actually okay. What's bothersome is the back legs and the angle of her horn.

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aperfecta In reply to ZeldaTheSwordsman [2012-10-10 19:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... now that I look, it does seem a little out of place, thanks
And yes... those back legs are terrible TT^TT

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cormy1 [2012-10-08 02:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Mouth/Jaw/Snout/Nose I don't know what it's called really but it looks too large, makes Celestia look very masculine in here, although I know she already looks masculine in-canon anyway, here it's a tad too big. That rear left leg though... Could use some more meat!
All glory to the Solar Empire!

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aperfecta In reply to cormy1 [2012-10-08 02:38:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you're right, it does look a bit too big and bulky for an alicorn, thanks! And yeah that back leg's all messed up... I know :3
Thanks for the critique!

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Helsaabi [2012-10-07 22:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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aperfecta In reply to Helsaabi [2012-10-07 22:27:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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Helsaabi In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-08 22:10:21 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Mapleflame2 [2012-10-07 21:19:44 +0000 UTC]

wwwwwwooooooooooowwwwww thats a lot o' faves!

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aperfecta In reply to Mapleflame2 [2012-10-07 21:24:16 +0000 UTC]

I know TT^TT I wanted to thank everyone but it would take a long while D:

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Mapleflame2 In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 22:16:18 +0000 UTC]

mkay

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0EvilBunnies0 [2012-10-07 19:24:03 +0000 UTC]

HO MAH
GAAAAAAAAAH
WAAAAAHHH *7* Q7Q amAZINNNGGG

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aperfecta In reply to 0EvilBunnies0 [2012-10-07 19:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you

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0EvilBunnies0 In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 19:38:09 +0000 UTC]

no problem~

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Cirdec [2012-10-07 05:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Dem wings... I love oversized, regal looking wings.

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aperfecta In reply to Cirdec [2012-10-07 13:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I do too <3

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alantongirl [2012-10-07 04:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Klark is right about that right leg. You'd better go fix that.

Other than that, it really stood out when I was checking my inbox. The shading is smooth and the hair is surprisingly realistic (That is, for Celestia standards. Good Lord her hair is a mess). Don't worry about the crown and boots, they look just fine to me. The wings could do with more feathers than it was given; some of the strands look like hair.

Great picture, certainly neat for a practice run.

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aperfecta In reply to alantongirl [2012-10-07 13:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3 Yeah I know about the back leg, I'll make sure I don't make noodle legged ponies in the future :3

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ChaosDragonAzoth [2012-10-07 04:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Rear leg, foreground. It looks like a noodle.

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aperfecta In reply to ChaosDragonAzoth [2012-10-07 04:08:36 +0000 UTC]

I thought that was it, but I was silly and was like "Is that right? WHAT?!"
And yes, it does resemble a noodle in appearance, I won't disagree :3

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blackyball22 [2012-10-07 02:11:43 +0000 UTC]

How Epical~ ^^

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aperfecta In reply to blackyball22 [2012-10-07 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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blackyball22 In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 14:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Yew ish welcome~

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KlarkKentThe3rd [2012-10-06 23:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Missis... fix that right leg, like, right now.

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aperfecta In reply to KlarkKentThe3rd [2012-10-07 03:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Help me out here, I've been staring at the picture too long,
Which leg? Thanks for the criticism though <3

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KlarkKentThe3rd In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 04:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Back leg. I am no expert on what horse parts are called, but the first two parts of the leg (that grow out of the body) must be WAY shorter.

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aperfecta In reply to KlarkKentThe3rd [2012-10-07 13:55:13 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean, it's too elongated x3 My bad! I'll try not to do it anymore :3

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KlarkKentThe3rd In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 18:12:57 +0000 UTC]

You can also correct it. I'll favorite if you do.

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aperfecta In reply to KlarkKentThe3rd [2012-10-07 18:28:43 +0000 UTC]

Pretty hard to correct when you have twenty layers on a picture, bro. I'm really indifferent to the fav's, this was a practice picture.

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KlarkKentThe3rd In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 19:01:18 +0000 UTC]

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aperfecta In reply to KlarkKentThe3rd [2012-10-07 19:34:30 +0000 UTC]

:/

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DoodleKel [2012-10-06 21:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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aperfecta In reply to DoodleKel [2012-10-07 03:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3

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DoodleKel In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-07 18:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^^

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aperfecta In reply to DoodleKel [2012-10-07 19:34:39 +0000 UTC]

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catz537 [2012-10-06 20:44:44 +0000 UTC]

no CM ? xD other than that, very pretty!

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aperfecta In reply to catz537 [2012-10-07 03:54:10 +0000 UTC]

I know, I got lazy TT^TT
Thank you, though

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cloudcat2 [2012-10-06 18:27:38 +0000 UTC]

she looks awsome XD

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aperfecta In reply to cloudcat2 [2012-10-06 20:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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cloudcat2 In reply to aperfecta [2012-10-06 21:15:29 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^.^

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Fallen12345 [2012-10-06 15:36:00 +0000 UTC]

OMG IT'S SO AWESOME

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aperfecta In reply to Fallen12345 [2012-10-06 15:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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