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annafisha — The depth of black hole
Published: 2007-11-26 00:37:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 78; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Why is the reality so painful?
I could not stop crying,
The scream echoes in my heart,
So many things are yearning to get out,
From this little heart.

I feel like I am alone,
Walking in this world,
And facing with thousand enemies.
Now, I am almost falling,
Into the depth of the black hole,
No one hears my scream,
My plead,
I am almost falling,
Cannot you see?
I need you.

I could not stand any longer,
I am really weak,
And the sorrow is draining my power,
I will fall,
Into the depth of the black hole,
Cannot you see?
I need you.
But too late,
I am falling,
Falling into the depth of hole,
And I am bleeding with tears.
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Comments: 4

doorfromheaven [2007-11-27 18:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Awwwah, that's so beautiful... sorry you feel that way...

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annafisha In reply to doorfromheaven [2007-11-28 10:25:42 +0000 UTC]

thanx so much..hehe i was really depressed that time but now a i'm okay..

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ImmortalityOfEmoPoet [2007-11-26 12:36:22 +0000 UTC]

aww sis i do hope u feel better after writing that it is really great except i think it should be in prose sebab tak berapa rhyme kut, entah still its awesome sis . keep it up

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annafisha In reply to ImmortalityOfEmoPoet [2007-11-26 12:44:42 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank u sis..poem tu open form..tulah xde rhyme..hehe..thanx for u comment sis..i do feel a lot better..thank u so much sis..

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