Comments: 11
Tavoriel [2009-07-06 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]
I don't have a subscription, so here's a fancy-schmancy "critique" delivered via comment:
I really like how Gaara's head turned out! The hair is bushy, and it has a bolder outline, and the face is smooth, and it has a thinner outline, and that makes it pop out really well. The shading on the hair is good too, and I think it's the dark lines that make all the difference. The rest of the drawing is very nicely and precisely done, but it's a little harder to see it because the lines are a little light... you've got the "drawing" bit down awesome, and I think what you could do to improve is really focus on finding out how to make things "pop out," like Gaara's head. Try being a little more extreme... try making light spots a little lighter, dark spots a little darker, and lines a little bolder to get a better 3D yet 2D effect! If some spots of a drawing are waaay darker than the color it's supposed to be and other spots are waaaay lighter, not only will it even out and look the right color, it'll look more 3D!
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Angel-Die In reply to Tavoriel [2009-07-13 00:32:59 +0000 UTC]
great thanks for the critique lord knows I need it.
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Tavoriel In reply to Angel-Die [2009-07-18 16:56:34 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!
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Ameni-Chan [2009-06-21 03:11:02 +0000 UTC]
*3* omg really nice
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Zari-MikoshiFC [2009-06-20 23:06:03 +0000 UTC]
Really cute T_T
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Green-Half [2009-06-20 19:58:39 +0000 UTC]
aww wis really good TuT i love this couple too, she is very cute girl nvn
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Shukaku-andbijusFC [2009-06-20 19:55:01 +0000 UTC]
really wonderful, you art is amazing >w< *_* yay Gaara and Zari together forever >D (PD:Matsuri sucks) XD
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Ravenniia [2009-06-20 19:46:31 +0000 UTC]
KIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I LOVE IT I LOVE IT WONDERFUL,AMAZING KIAAAA SO CUTEEEE THIS COUPLE IS SO CUTE AND BEST FOREVER >//////<
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Angel-Die In reply to Protomankini [2009-06-20 00:14:30 +0000 UTC]
I had problems coloring those parts so I outlined them in black to cover up my mistakes. heh I'm still working on staying in the lines.
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