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+Breakdown+ Extra 1
Published: 2011-05-17 23:35:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 25555; Favourites: 613; Downloads: 222
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Spanish version:: [link]Well, I decided to do this extra chapter between part B and C, in order to know a little about Haru's life after Kotomi left (so no yuri moments here xD)
This was thought to be a funny thing, but I ended up adding some drama, I couldn't help it, I'm a dramatic person
anyway, I hope you enjoy it : )
I'm already starting to work on part C, so I guess there will be more pages soon~
And as always, thanks to ~co426e for the translation correction
Cross Heart/Someday/Breakdown Β© *AnaKris
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Comments: 124
ooh nice! haha.. I've read this after the ending so now I know what was that 'pay back for' hahaha
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Oh god, haru es adoptada , me gustaria un capitulo explicando eso xD , esta genial *-* , amo tu manga :33
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why did she told her that D
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I love this series, never had I read a manga that I can't pull my self away from
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Wow, she's not their real daughter? didn't see that one comming O.o now I really wnat to knowmore 
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really professional...how did you learn how to do it?
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IT'S SO AMAZING!! Oh my god I almost cried. ;3;
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Great comic but I admit at first I was so lost. I read it from left to right so was like ...."HUH?!" for a bit. XD I'm so not use to Mangas.
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WOW ! ana felicidades por la DD ! es magnifico ! realmente la mereces
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Muchas gracias! ;w; *emocionada*
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totalmente meresido ana ! x3 disfrutalo ! pronto tendras otras x3
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I'm floored by how incredible that was. Never did I think I was going to get such depth in a short strip.
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Nice shojo manga! Your work looks very professional, and I hope a publisher finds you and gets this in print! Keep up the good work!
Thumbs up for Haru breaking the fourth wall.
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Congrats on the DD! Im really glad you recieved it because its been so long sence ive read any manga and your story made me miss it
lovely work! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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Nice Manga! Now I need to read the rest...Congrads on the DD!
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aww this is beautiful. This looks so professional too! I love the story line also
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Very nice piece. It's the first comic page I've read of yours, so I was reading left to right before I realized in the marriage panel that i should be reading right to left, and then the dialogue made sense. Good job!
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This was so cute- I love the "married" panel
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Nice paneling.
All your characters have the same face and body shapes, though. You might want to work on that because it's hard to tell one person from another.
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I don't even like yuri, but I'm willing to read this from start to finish (the whole comic)~
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Yuri doesn't mean girlxgirl relationship exactly, it means girlxgirl sexual intercourse I believe. c:
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Close enough. So technically, it's shoujo-ai, then?
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Yup. c:
Or you could just say "lesbian relationship" but that's no fun. XD
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I guess not XD
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amazing! im not that into yuri, but this makes me want to read more!!! you totally deserve this DD
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it's beutiful but i have no idea whats going on
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Haha, you'll have to read the entire comic to understand it better. This is just an extra chapter : )
You can read the pages here: [link]
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I like this, it's very cute and professional looking.
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I don't really care for yuri, but despite that, this is a great comic. The artwork is pretty good, although the anatomy could be better at some points. It does seem like an interesting story is unfolding. So good job, congrats on the DD!
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oh~ so its yuri... >< i'm not a fan of it, but the artwork is so cute! ><
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Hola! Tengo que decir que (me he leΓdo la versiΓ³n en espaΓ±ol...) me ha sorprendido encontrar en devianar un trabajo como este. Es muy poco comΓΊn ver manga con una apariencia tan profesional, la colocaciΓ³n de las viΓ±etas y de los bocadillos, wow! y las tramas, geniales oye
sigue asΓ que vas por el buen camino
(pd: y ya como curiosidad, me queda preguntarte los aΓ±os que tienes
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Muchas gracias! me alegra que te haya gustado <3
Y respondiendo a tu pregunta... tengo 20 aΓ±os xD
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pues para ser tan joven tienes un gran talento!!
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I hope you don't mind me being one amongst many replying to you, but sir, that is a flame. If there is something wrong with the art or you don't understand the plot, do some analysis and give her some feedback on what to improve on. You know a critique. Calling something horrible without reason is offensive.
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If you don't have something intelligent to tell, I don't understand why you bother commenting here : )
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detto da uno che copia lo stile di naruto senza svilupparne uno proprio mi sembra un commento poco rilevante... pensa a te stesso prima di giudicare gli altri.. soprattutto se devi criticare gratuitamente senza spiegare cos'Γ¨ che ti ha fatto avere qell'opinione
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It's your opinion i respect that but if you don't like it ahm...don look at it..?!
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