Micky-P [2015-01-14 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]
The most detailed and rich scene I've yet seen from you. Very nice work. My only major suggestion is the shadows. Some are cast in different directions than others, the books are cast towards top/right while most objects are casting shadows to bottom right.
The two books have shadows which make hem appear to be floating off the desk surface, quite long shadows for thin books. While the shadow under the tea cup/saucer is very slight when the cup would cast a longer shadow since it comes further off the surface.
Generally perhaps more blur on shadows.
But the shadows are the only issue otherwise a gorgeous composition,
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