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Published: 2020-01-08 19:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 411; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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This is a character from café rouge otome visual novel that just got fundraised on kickstarter. He is my fave character he is too cute and always speak in foreign european language i can't wait to play his route.By the way for those who are curious and want to do visual novels you should really try out cloudnovel it is powerful and awfully simple to use. And there is a great community around it.
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This piece is very intriguing since the first glimpse, with a clear silhouette and well-picked color palette. It's very stylished but in a skillful way and the dynamic pose pick the viewer's interest instantly. The character design is balanced and the advanced shading adds a lot of details to the clothing. The only slight oddness about the anatomy seems to be with the rear hand, which appears with the positioning of the elbow and structure of the forearm. Also I'm not sure about the direction of the black'n'yellow piece there. Either way, the direction and foreshortening of the arm here is nightmarishly difficult, so considering that it's quite good.
I dare to claim the background is a blurred out photo, but it's not disturbing with this amount of blur (this really seems to split opinions but I'm fine with it). The character seems to be in perspective with the background to me. All-in-all, this is a very eye-friendly and well-rounded piece. Good job!
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Indeed i took a picture for this one 
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Fabulous piece you have here.
The work with the anatomy of the character is very satisfactory. The work and details of her dress were also very well done and it is also great that they seem to have semi-realistic textures.
I also have to point out that the work with the shadows on the dress was relatively well done, although there seem to be minor errors in the right arm.
Overall, fabulous illustration, although the background could have been better.
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Yes you are right i am beginning to include backgrounds so i am beginning by a first step before doing the next one. As time goes i'll make wonderful backgrounds but i still prefer my drawings without it for now. Its just a personnal matter as i really want to climb that step.
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Well, I guess it will be a matter of time before you switch to better funds for your illustrations.
I would also recommend more practice when making shadows.
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Sure thing i dont know if i need better funds as i want to do them from scratch but things will come slowly in place its a matter of practice and Will.
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Well, as the saying goes "Practice makes perfect".
I will also recommend that you practice the shadows a bit for future illustrations.
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LOL, I assumed for a moment that you hadn't read my recommendation about the shadows.
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Ohhh ... I already understood the thing, xD.
And also as a note for future pieces, I recommend you also make more full body pieces, to know how well the anatomy of a full body comes out, especially with improved shadows.
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Sure thing my next work is full body. I Will finish it when i have Time though in at my final semester of uni its hard to keep Up with both
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Ohh, it's good to hear that.
Hopefully it will be an excellent and well made piece (like this XD)!
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I like how that sounds.
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First of all, I love the pose this character is in. It gives a real sense of a busy cafe environment, making the entire piece feel more real. Furthermore, the detail on this piece is amazing. All the little creases and folds in the clothing as well as the food looking true to its respective textures is great.
Overall, the shading is really well done. My only criticism here would be the shading done on the clothes behind the hand - the shadow almost looks like it's outlining the hand rather than acting like a drop shadow. For me, it makes it seem incredibly flat and 2D compared to the rest of the piece.
Perhaps the blur on the background could've been done differently too, with different aspects being blurred more or less than other parts, giving more of a sense of depth to the piece.
Other than that, this is great! I'm not going to comment on any anatomy or anything since I'm terrible at it and will probably say something that's wrong anyway XD
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Nah i dont mind most of the time when something feels off it is off. However i can only agree with you for the shading behind the hand i did it so quickly i didnt even notice this error i'll try to give more attention on next piece. For the background if you scroll my gallery you'll see i am just begginning to do them so i'm still struggling to find my own technique but it will come. For now i'll hang in there! thanks for your comment.
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