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just a change...lolsheesh! Stupid scanner ruined my colors, as always....-.-||
hm...first time coloring abstracts.
i REALLY need to work on english now...
tools: Watercolor, ink
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if this is the ruined version, I wish we could see the original cause this looks good.
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I love your use of colours - the watercolours etc - here. Did you use watercolour paper as well? Though I don't have a premium account, critique I'd give would be about the posture and positioning and proportion of your character, though I know those are pretty much THE hardest things to get right for human figures. The bit that I find the most jarring is the proportion of the eye - it seems to stretch further back towards the ear than it really should for the angle the girl's head is on. If I was only looking at the eye, I would think the head was turned much further towards me than it is.
I like the shoulders, back, hair, and your use of colours to show the three-dee-ness of her body. The nose and mouth are a bit small for my taste, but that's a stylistic and personal thing. The hand and wrist are a little awkward, but I'm in no position to suggest what to do there - I would probably start by making the hand a little wider, but beyond that I'm lost. All that considered, it's still a stunning artwork.
...Did you upload this the evening before our english exam?
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haha...thanks for the critique. XD How'z germany?
(this was uploaded on 16th, which was TWO days before our english exam, i believe. lol)
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Germany is cold and strange and I am having a very good time while also missing people from NZ. I particularly miss being able to have long and complicated conversations about stuff. My words are all halting and bitsy.
And I thought it was the 17th, but it would seem that it was the 18th; I somehow got it mixed up with the scholarship english exam on the 16th, which was a tuesday. How peculiar.
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This picture reminds me of this song: [link] Even though it's Bleach... 
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LOOOKS REALLY GOODAS,DMSADSJAIDAJKDthe colours are really nice :3
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It's amazing how well your handled your colors. Watercolor is an unforgiving medium and it takes a lot of experience and careful meditation to effectively draw even a minute detail.
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love how you do a bunch of different mediums. Nice work
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Love it! i really like how the colors bleed together....
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this looks really good i love the colors and her hair style is cute
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Oh, this is beautiful~!
I really love the coloring!
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oooh pretty (even if the scanner 'ruined' it)
LOLL whats wrong with your english?
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haha. no i mean my english exam. which is on friday...O_o
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oh LOL now i feel stupid... perhaps i should re-take my thinking skills exam next year O.o
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omg keep coloring your abstracts 
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So pretty! I love all the colors you use. ^^ They're so vivid, but not neon. (MUCH better than how my watercolors turn out! XD)
If it's okay, I'll critique a bit (in comments, because I'm poor, poor, poor! 
I think she looks a bit stiff, as if she's all stuck-together. Not to say she's FLAT, just like her arm is attached to her side. That's really the only main thing, other than her thumb - I think that "realistically" you would be able to see more of it, but that's just me. There's really not much to critique. 
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I love how you blend the colours and they work really well as a whole to tie the entire composition together. The head's out of proportion to the rest of her body though, and you could've worked it up a little more just to bring more definition to the figure so that she doesn't get lost in the background. : ) Otherwise great work!
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liked the makeup *-*
great coloring, too
what tools did u use? that doesn't seem to be done all by pencil...
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oh it's watercolor. forgot to mention. lol
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XD
i can't paint with watercolor...
i always manage to ruin the draw T-T
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(I cannot critique for I don't have a Premium but I will through Comment if that's alright)
I like it a lot. And, though I am not the best artist in the world and you're a lot better, the shoulder and arm look a bit rigid in the position they are in in the picture. They still keep proportion, but maybe, if you had it a little farther from the body, it would look more natural.
I still like it. A lot of your other stuff is fantastic as well!
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haha..i understand. the rigid position is a problem i have with a lot of my pictures, i'll try to improve. thanks~
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Welcome ^-^
You're art is so fun to look at. you are very talented
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