theassociate [2005-03-22 23:42:52 +0000 UTC]
pretty good.
at first i didn't understand it, but, after i reread it, i really liked it. i like the progression, the rhythm... i think what lost me, though, was the second stanza. afterword i realized it was just the setup.
nicely done.
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