pinky500280 [2009-10-08 06:30:45 +0000 UTC]
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This is a wonderful concept, and I enjoy viewing it. The composition especially is very aesthetically pleasing. There is also a creative glow brought on my the fact that the lower right of the background, the butterfly, and her eye-shadow are all the same color. Also, the windswept hair, give it a free and wild feel to it, although the cool colors bind you tightly to a feeling of tranquility. My first constructive opinion has to do with her line of vision, and it may be fine as it is, but it depends on the feel you are going for. Right now, she is not quite making eye contact with the butterfly. Her gaze is directed right beneath it, so it appears that she is looking past it. If you are trying to symbolize more of a sense of abandon, then this inattention seems perfect, however, if she is supposed to be raptured by the flight of the butterfly, it might be better if her line of sight was lined up. My final comment has to do with your transparent circle in the center, which holds your username and the site name. I think that it is completely unnecessary, because it not only takes away part of your focus from the purples and blues of the picture, but you also have a far more elegant logo marking in the bottom right hand corner.
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