Comments: 10
SandyL30n [2020-06-14 23:44:54 +0000 UTC]
Nice ship!! Very beautiful
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MrMagistralMalik [2020-04-27 05:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Because of my loading screen being too laggy, I almost thought that you shipped The Flash with Batwoman. It would be laughable if someone shipped a lesbian character with a male character once again. But it wouldn't be that surprising if someone is going to do it or has done it already before. But I digress. I like the art. I just believe that you should use references more at least. I also believe that the line tool should be something you could work on. I have struggled through this a lot myself. That is kinda why I made my outlines bolder since. However, you don't have to make the outlines bold like how I would try to do so on my artwork. Try your best one erasing certain parts of the outlining. A correction tool could work well with trying to make the smoothly done outings if you have Medi Bang Paint Pro or Fire Alpaca or any program that allows various art-related tools. And I think that there should be a huge variety with the way you draw your characters later on, or at least with utilizing shape language to be able to strongly tell apart more out of the characters. It isn't necessarily like Sleepykinq with having the characters stick to one shape. It is something that a lot of cartoons try to do with the exceptions of if they are trying to make a quickly made form of art and animation or something. Sticking to one shape or at least two for maximum could be something you could try to do. Whatever shape you feel you have used the most for the character, try adding more of that type of shape to have that character look a little more like that main shape used. But I feel like if you want to try to get the characters to have unique differences in a way than just with colors, you would need to figure out how to practice with changing up the proportions, and a little suggestion with giving poses as well, along with adding some color overlays and some background to give the feeling that you are trying to give to the audience. Like drawing some roses, a grassy field, hearts, etc. I hope you could be able to work on your art further on and be able to continue. That is what I suggest. You do not have to take the suggestion. I look forward to seeing more of your art. Keep up the incredible work! I'd love to see more on my notification feed!
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2CherrySakura2 In reply to MrMagistralMalik [2020-04-27 05:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Thx for the feedback, I will try to add background I more art of mine, I sometimes do things differently for some characters like five some characters more oval heads, it's just more noticeable with animal characters
And yes, I need to work on Line art more, you can tell it was sloppy here
Sometimes I do shade and do add backgrounds and sometimes don'tadd
Like I said, thx for the feedback
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MrMagistralMalik In reply to 2CherrySakura2 [2020-04-27 05:50:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, no worries.
Also, I know it might be your type of style of creating art.
I am just suggesting shapes could work so that way if you draw a character later on, and you flip them to the other side, you wouldn't want them to lean weirdly or something.
And being able to convey more of that art and give the emotion to convey to the audience.
Instead of drawing someone to be simply happy, make them really happy.
Instead of drawing someone to be sad, make them sadder.
If drawing someone to be angry, draw them angrier.
The exaggeration in art helps a lot in a way and that is what you should try to consider at least when doing art with being able to add in expressions to the art as well.
Poses can help at least if you can't do backgrounds that much.
And if you can't really do poses, backgrounds like gradient ones or hand-drawn ones that are blurred out a little bit really could help make the difference of what you are trying to emotionally convey to the audience.
Using references to try to understand the shapes, and like simplifying the characters almost into shapes, and then deciding which shapes to stick with helps you be able to draw the characters in a more even way, being somewhat easier for you to read out of the character in away.
That is what I would suggest you could try to do or look into seeing the differences it could make at least.
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Jokerarthur20 [2020-04-27 04:50:07 +0000 UTC]
I like this ship
But I ship it Flash with Killer Frost and Spiderman x Batgirl X'd
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