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106Eli — Rhonda Falls pg.4 (Colored)
Published: 2014-03-13 00:37:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1803; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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So my hand healed and Vuwah La! Here it is! Page 4 colored. xDP.S. Please ignore the scanning quality. I don't know why my printer decided to hate me right now...
Page 3 (Colored): 106eli.deviantart.com/art/Rhon…
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keep up the good work. p.s can you the panel bigger?
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I'll say this about this comic. It's mostly good; I like the story and were it's going. But I will add this caveat: it is extremely difficult to determine the panel order. It's cluttered and needs to be streamlined. Work on a storyboard and set up the page better. Might help to also expand the page count and enlarge the panels. For example, in a standard comic book, what happens on this one page would take up at least 2, maybe 3 pages.
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