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Published: 2012-02-23 21:50:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1337; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 6
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READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFTAnd already we have our first cameo.
Ah, snow...dandruff from the heavens.
Waiiiiiii~
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Featuring:
Team Scrappy 's ...house (lol)
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This colouring style is consuming way much more time than it should have. Q_Q It's almost 6AM. Da hell?!GOODNIGHTDAMMIT
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When I saw her with the face,I thought "Ding!" xD
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bfnvbhcbvnhf Everything that you draw always looks so amazing!!!!!
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Oh, you flatter me. >.< I'm not really that good.
Thank you kindly.
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cdnjvbdsj Your very welcome 
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Hey Rei! 
First of all, the coloring, paneling, and the way your drew your characters are really well done. It really makes the comic so much more engaging and easier to read. The characters also take on a life of their own, and their personality really shows. The way you used different colors to express different emotions is also a nice touch. (The part where Mizui finally realizes that it is snowing.)
Some of the text is quite sloppy however. I really think that just detracts from all the effort you put into coloring. So putting in the extra time to just touch it up will make it a lot better than it already is.
The 3rd panel on the first page, could be replaced with something that builds up their arrival as well. Instead of showing plain snow, it would be better to show BoDoh's footprints, as you did for the second panel, or even draw in a silhouette of the characters trodding through the snow. That would create a build up effect. Snow->Footprints->Silhouette/larger footprints->Revealing the source of the footprints.
Also, in the part where BoDoh is picking up Mizui, you should show Mizui actually off the ground, as I was a bit confused as to what was happening before I read the text saying *pick up* Use text to a minimal, especially if you can portray it visually. Drawing action(?) lines behind Mizui as she bounces off of Doh would also help illustrate what is going on clearer.
Overall though, the comic is very well done, and a lot better than a lot of the comics I find here on DA. It's also colored, so what more can we ask for? 
btw, did you get the name BoDoh from the Indonesian/Malaysian word for stupid?
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lol, "IT'S SNOWIIIIIIING!!!" 
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Haha! Thank you. I'm glad you think so. ^^
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Cuz snow is a mystical source we have never seen before........
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Ya, Snow City isn't as realistic
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Oh my gosh, there's so many things on this page that made me grin..!
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Especially the first two panels - that was brilliant, nothing less! >u<
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This is so cute!! I can hardly process the cuteness >:3 I can tell these guys are gonna be fast favs~
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Ehehe! It makes me really happy you think that. Thank you kindly!
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omaomaomaomaomaomaomaomaomaomaomaomaOMA!!!!
Wants to take Mizuii home and huggles forever and ever....please
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This gets all of my
the team is already winning me over :3
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Yay~!
TRAFFIC LIGHTZ WILL DOMINATE YOUR MIND.
....and your roads.
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You are very welcome! cx
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Wait till she sees lava (never gonna happen).
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LOL
Looks like it would be an interesting experience for her. XD
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She's so adorable my goodness.
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Lol yup
Snickers:sdnifbvauohbvoAUWbrvdOIUVB *dies*
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Haha, their house! That's a first, cameo-wise. Thanks! Also, I love these guys. Page looks awesome, looking forward to seeing more!
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They'll only appear too soon.....
I'm glad it has your approval.
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Go to bed ! XD 6 a.m ... It's 11 p.m for me xDDD 7 hours between us... Lol
And WAIIIIIIII I totally have the same reaction when I see snow xDD
This page is waiiiiiiiiiiiiii <3
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Ahaha! Thank you so much. >w<
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