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[2007-10-14 06:24:02 +0000 UTC]
"Syryn Smyth"
(United States)
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Watching: 245; Pageviews: 25578; Comments Made: 756; Friends: 245
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I've watched John Oliver's show in which he talks about prosecutors. That seems a huge problem, don't you think? I don't intend to be disrespectful with your country, it's none of my business, but..., holy shit... Justice system in Spain is veeeeery corrupted but, at least, we don't have a lot of movies talking about how wonderful is it.
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I love John Oliver. I'm trying to remember the episode about prosecutors. Vaguely remember it...
Feel free to be disrespectful to the US. We're going down, for real. I spent all day watching the Kavanaugh hearing and the talking heads afterwards. The dude treated the senators like gullible parents - he was lying left and right and they let him get away with it.
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How's the writing going? Are you going to tell us more about Ileana's past? It is not because I want to be too insistent, it's just that I'm going to put some suspension points...
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I'm taking a break from writing. I know. That sucks. It was beginning to feel like a burden. But hey, I'm not getting paid, so breaks are ok. But, since you asked so nicely, I'll let you know that Ileana is a Naiad. The dry riverbed that the Princess and Pet travelled down was her home until she was captured by an evil witch of old. She now lives in a large, oversized bottle in a dungeon in Joppa when she is not being used as a means to keep Karma alive. She is really kind of pissed off, which is why she is so moody. The only way to truly get her power back would be to restore the flow of the river.
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So this witch wants Karma alive for some reason. Mmmm, politics.
Oh, no, you can't leave your readers like this. I'll wait, don't worry, but you have to finish this. Where do you live? I will go there and tickle your feet if I have to.
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Whenever I see something absurd in the bureaucratic world I picture in my head an open suitcase with a lot of green pieces of paper, and next to it a loaded gun. The suitcase (or the bag) may have a cute $ drawn. Immediately after that I picture a guillotine in the middle of a public square and I calm down for a while.
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I've read "The spy rider". At first I thought that it was a metaphor about the lies we use to tell to ourselves, or about self-censorship, but, clearly, I was wrong. If you were talking about the advantages of blind loyalty, well, I cannot agree on that, but it may be my misanthropy talking.
-Kill all humans!
-Shut up, Misanthropy, I'm talking with Syryn.
If is not a metaphor about anything, then is still very enjoyable and very witty. Though, I think that the ending is not the one you had originally planned, but I may be mistaken. Anyway, another deserved fav for you and, please, keep writting about grave keepers and related characters.
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Thank you! I originally was trying to come up with a different kind of chastity tale. So, the Heartless that is mummified and feeding information to the clone feels everything although it is just a little muted. Then whenever the clone achieves enough manipulation to reach orgasm, the mummified version does not quite get there and is left achingly horny yet not completely satisfied. That was the original idea that was behind the story that ended up being told. I like the spy rider idea from a sci-fi / fantasy perspective, but I felt that the story was not particularly erotic in the end. It was actually kind of depressing. I was going to do all kinds of mean things to the main character, but in the end, I couldn't. I wanted it to end on a more positive note. So, yeah, I ended it differently than my original plan. In the end, I think that it is about self-love. If you loath some part of yourself - maybe, for example, your sexual identity - then you begin to experience the world in a muted fashion. To really experience the wonders of the world it is important to accept and love oneself. Don't deny your fantasies. Try to understand them.
I wrote the next Ileana / Karma section this week. It is a real struggle to write something that feels authentic. I have to just let the words flow out. Then get a sense of where it is going. Then edit a lot. I find that Ileana is really, really angry. So much so, that my jaw muscles get sore from gritting my teeth while I'm typing her words. The depth of her anger must really scare Karma...
The next section I will write is a rambling bit from Zeigh about body piercings and the difference between "then" and "than". When I write her I try to get as random as possible and then somehow try to make it sexy. We'll see...
Thanks for reading and commenting!
I've been buried in a four book commercial series YA horror, but that is almost over, and then I'll spend some more time reading my huge erotica backlog.
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When I read horror books it happens to me that I have too much control of the situation. I can stop reading or skip pages or read slower, for example. So, I've never felt scared reading a book. Maybe is because I've been watching horror movies too many years and I'm desensitized. If you can enjoy horror books, then, congratulations, milady.
I cannot consider Zeigh sexy, she's too "childish", but I can consider her cute. Ileana, though, is not human, but is badass, therefor sexy (in a ominous way). Like Mystique in the "X-Men" and "X-Men 2" movies, more or less.
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Yes. Perhaps I misspoke (mistyped?). You are correct. Zeigh is too childlike to be sexy. I meant to say that I try to tie her ramblings towards something that a lifelong slave might consider normal things but are actually quite shocking - titillating perhaps.
I like psychological horror or ghost stories. I don't care so much for really depressing bloody horror or lovecraftian horror. This is a YA horror series, so it's pretty tame as far as the horror is concerned.
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I've read the full "subGrrl Deconstructs" trilogy. My first thought was "What the hell?", the second one was "Wow!". I'm glad subGrrl was able to create her own goddess of love, and to break her mental chains, with a little help. If I'm not wrong she can end her relationship with NemesisGirl and BossWoman whenever she wants, so she is free. Well, as free as a simulation can be inside a flash drive, or a character inside a written story. I didn't understand, though, the featureless women metaphor. Social pressure, maybe? Are they even a metaphor?
Anyway, this story is fucking good. You can be proud.
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Thank you!
Well, this is a story about discovering who you are particularly when what you find does not fit any mold that you have seen before. I had a bit of self-discovery that I went through while writing this story - particularly, I was angry at myself for being both feminist and submissive. I had always equated feminism with being extroverted, and here I discover that, no, feminism is being exactly what you want to be.
subGrrl ends up in the perfect relationship (for her!) as the submissive pet of NemesisGirl and BossWoman. She loves them and they love her. They all have their place in a polygamous relationship. subGrrl loves her bondage and now she can do it safely. And if she discovers that she is no longer submissive, then she can walk out of her cell (at the appropriate time of course).
The featureless women were meant to be the shallow categories that label us as we go through life - the societal expectations that we are supposed to adhere to. Their names are the same as all the female characters from the Brady Bunch.
As it so happens, I've decided that I personally am not as submissive as I had thought when writing this story. I am definitely more of a switch. How else do I find inspiration to torture my characters?
Once again, thank you so much for reading!
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Pleased and flattered to be Hope you'll find a few treats here and there in my little doll's house 
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