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[2008-05-16 05:27:59 +0000 UTC]
"jake"
(New Zealand)
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Watching: 7; Pageviews: 2301; Comments Made: 139; Friends: 7
# Comments
Comments: 34
heya ^^ was just gunna add you my memory just returned to me
hows u going ??
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Im having issues with your picture. ummm. Could you pic a new one???
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oks cool i shall get another thankies ^^
I'll send it to yous privatly *paranoid* <.<....>.>
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welcome just curious who is you ????
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^^ good to know I is random too but dont tell me xD
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Hello there. You wernt joking.. You havnt posted anything...
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yeah i'm not very artistic at all and if i posted some poems people would think im emo
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Let them think it... Im pretty sure people thin my poetry in emofied!
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umm yeah but i mean really emofied i went through bad part a while back thats when i did most of my poetry it is very dark
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Its ok... Most of my poety is about my Dead Best Friend...
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ok i only have one left i tried to destroy them when i felt better but here it is
to kill is a cardinal sin
but to save is a saviour's grace
what if two were the same
to save is too mame
forever the vicious cycle does spin
to greed is to win
if what makes humananity human does fade
what are we but a blank shade
always in darkness our minds must be
for crazy would we go if but a glimmer we see
terminal has the human condition rendered our host
near death our exsistance is our planet close to a ghost
night to day our meaningless existance is turning
we have come to a conclusion of power through learning
but our assumption was wrong
exsistance end the music does gong
yeah it isnt one of my best
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WOW Your really good. You should post these!!
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thats my only one i had a better one a while back but it dissapeared will have to think of some more for you aye ^^
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O.o really ??
i just write what pops into my head is nothing special
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cool i just made another if you wanna hear it want your opinion before i upload it to deviant
Eyes Of The Corrupt:-
In the night they twinkle at me,
who knows the things they may see,
night and day they watch never do they sleep,
always watching for in the night those who creep.
Into my mind they bore away,
hoping my secrets they do not betray,
as their spindly reach does grow,
where privacy remains i do not know.
Soon our lives shall be confined,
nowhere shall we be safe save our minds,
society monitors proclaiming heaven,
but reality is not far from Orwell 1987.
Power growing for the undeserving,
for ones of the street this state is conserning,
however hard they watch our actions they cannot control,
confined as we maybe we still possess a soul.
what do you think, sorry i havent been on lately ^^
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kk thanks just wanted someones opinion and you seem good at this stuff
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lol yus i think its really cute on animes with the neko girls xD
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