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jakthehero99
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[2016-08-09 23:54:03 +0000 UTC]
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# Statistics
Favourites: 334; Deviations: 29; Watchers: 12
Watching: 31; Pageviews: 2250; Comments Made: 227; Friends: 31
# Comments
Comments: 30
You're welcome.
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also, do you wanna see the type of art that i do on paper?
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Sorry, I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I think you need quite a bit of practice.
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Well, okay. I can definitely see some skill. But I think you could use some improvement with certain things. The hands, for example look really weird.
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Well...it's not that good.
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well, multiple talented artists draw fingers like that
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what else is wrong with it?
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Well...I'm not really a fan of your style. Purely subjective. Maybe someone else would like it.
Besides that, I think some of the lines should be more solid and thicker. One more thing, use a pencil next time so you can get rid of any mistakes you might make and be able to use the pen to trace the lines you made with ink in order to make them more solid and thicker.
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dude, i used a pencil as a template. also, i dont have a pen like that. and i understand you like shaded things, but get into other art styles. just saying
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I didn't mention shaded stuff at all. I was talking about the lines that make up the two figures you drew not being entirely solid. I mean, it's good for a rough sketch at least.
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I know. And its not a rough sketch. Things I do with pen mean I drew the base with pencil and I draw the finished thing with pen. And a sharpie is the only thing I have to make the lines more solid, but it makes it look bad
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Well, when I say solid, I mean try to make it so some of the lines look like one continuous line instead of a bunch of short lines that are loosely connected to or near each other. You know, like how the outlines on most cartoons are drawn. Of course, if rough lines are your style, then okay, you do you. But please keep my advice in mind in case you want to try something new.
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well, have you tried this art?
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A bit. I don't particularly like it much. It's alright, but not really my thing.
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well, then why do you suggest it if you've never tried it?
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No, I just said that I've tried it, a bit. Ergo, I tried it and I didn't like it.
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then i want to see if you can draw better than my style. i dare you to draw real me in your style
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No. I'm not taking your dare. I'm not drawing fan art of you, just to prove something to someone who apparently can't take the idea of someone not liking their style of art. I have class assignments, and an actual job to worry about. That stuff that I've posted so far, those are things that are specifically for my classes, not stuff that I simply did for leisure.
I'm trying really hard to be nice, but you're trying my patience with how you're trying to make me like your work. I will tell you this and I hope you take it to heart that I'm not insulting you. In my opinion your art is good for someone who is starting out drawing. I think that, like me, your skills need more refinement. I'm no da vinci either.
I said it before and I'll say it again. I myself don't like your style. I think it needs more refinement. Maybe someone else will like it, Hell that's statistically likely, but not me.
I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to block you since it seems you're not going to listen to reason.
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you know something: you deserve more watchers
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yeah, i try to draw art like this!
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