uberbechin [2003-08-22 01:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice to see more from you! You are getting better!

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spyed [2003-04-10 10:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.

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wayah [2003-02-20 20:43:27 +0000 UTC]

and a watch fo' you

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uberbechin [2003-02-17 07:21:59 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad you are posting your poetry...don't let the snobs bother you, most people are nice and there's some good critiques here, too.

WELCOME TO DA!

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chronoflmzon [2003-02-16 23:08:59 +0000 UTC]

welcome to DA.... (SCORE i was the first person to post)
hope you have a good stay....

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poet-of-da-north [2003-02-16 23:06:13 +0000 UTC]

oo a new person! hello! welcome to da deviant art place.... yr poem is very well written i like it! i think i'm gonna deviant watch you!

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