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[2002-09-04 13:31:33 +0000 UTC]
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Favourites: 7; Deviations: 0; Watchers: 15
Watching: 11; Pageviews: 4197; Comments Made: 91; Friends: 11
# Comments
Comments: 44
I deem thee language kami. Pimpin gallery. Stay up.
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Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?
What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.
You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.
I offer only the truth, nothing more.
Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill
spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.
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Gosh. You even called in the policy violation people.
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i have my own interpretations, though the reader doesent necissarily have to follow along (or rather you got a generally close idea, thats all i ask), or at least not in this poem for sure. thanx though. ill get a comment on one of your works in a min.
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Hi.
Yes, well, I havn't written a poem since forever. Not anything I like, anyway. Uni is a terrible place, it drains your brains and makes you try too hard. It's embarrassing. (convienient how I have things to blame for my stagnant self)
I think I'm also over DA. It's too big and I have no time to play in its many corners. Yet I still log on to see if anyone cares about me enough to leave me a note or something. I am a person of no life. (ahh, low self esteem to start the new year) (no no, I actually think I'm quite brilliant)
I'll continue to come on every once and a while to read some fun poetry from you and your type. I keep meaning to get to your prose, because apparently, it's better than your poetry...but it's so much longer, and brain consuming. Perhaps, some day...
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of course, thanks for the favoritism - i just got back from NYC and am convinced that it's the largest existing installation piece - the whole place is an art project even if no one realizes it - anyhow, i'll get about reading yr stuff tonight likely
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Thank you for your comment, you have one of the best prose's I have ever read here on DA in your favorites -- although it is sad........
you get my point.
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Thanks for your words on my story. As I said in the description, the goal was to portray a dream of mine... if paradise was ruined, it wouldn't be my dream would it? Heh, but I understand what you are saying... I'm simply not that much of a dark writer.. I've written dark stories but I prefer happy endings where the guy gets the girl, the world doen't blow up, and etc. Though that's not to say that the story 'm working on won't have a bad ending.
All in all, thanks for the comment, it helped point out a few problems with the piece and I'll see if I can't avoid those problems as I write my next story.
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thank you very much. I'm flattered to have my work compared to the great work of Kahlo. It means allot
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i think making porn music, however, would be the coolest job ever - especially if they paid you in soy white castle burgers
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yaaaaaaaaaay someone likes cat power =]
and polly jean =]
i think pj and les claypool should get married and have a kid together ... that would be boss
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thanks to yr comment on my poem "fever cat", and my own dissatisfaction w/the limitations of my stijl, I HAVE USED PUNCTUATION
be afraid, i relinquished the stuff a yr and a half ago, so getting back on should be interesting
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Thanks for the comment on "Pretentious."
Of course, having never read "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock" I can only speculate as to whether I've approximated some portion of its spirit. Then again, perhaps you're merely making sarcastic reference to what could be interpreted as a pretentious comment by an earlier visitor. Bravo!
JK
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umm yeah - it didn't show my first thing so i wrote another, briefer one - and now it's showing the first, too
oh well
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thankyou greatly for the watch! and comments
and for liking the bands you do
it's nice to see good taste
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thanks much for the watch - now we've got binoculars on eachother like spinster neighbors
hmm
sigur ros just played here
and I FUCKING GOT KICKED OUT OF THE VENUE
BEFORE THEY STARTED
alcohol is not a friendly concert buddy when yr 18
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thanks for your comment and criticism on my poem... i'm really glad that you think it has potential (even) on DA... yeah, i get you on that rhythm thing, it was just a lot of thoughts spilling out of me... i already hacked off some parts that didn't quite fit before submitting... i will continue to try and improve my work.. thanks again
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Thanks for your comment. I wrote the poem up quickly because I didn't feel like submitting a five-minute sketch without putting some more effort into it. So I didn't really put an inordinate amount of time into the poetry part of it. I guess I really should've, because your comment was really right; That line DOES seem unoriginal when I think about it. Thanks.
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Hey, you've got some pretty interesting writing. It's colorful, descriptive, and provovative, and that's what I like best about it. Nice job!
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you did sylvia plath? i did ted hughes. i was gonna say i wish they were both dead, but hey, they are! thank god its over
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Thanks for the comment on 'Life Behind the Perfect Family' I know it was for the forum still. It was very insightful, and i'm glad you like the poem. As for the cliches I put those in there with the purpose for the reader to feel. Things like this happens too often, and is yet ignored. Now I must look through your gallery.
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my excuse for this week:
had this essay in Eng due. Was working on the darn thing all week, but it's still crap. I don't think I want to bore you all with that one.
I'll put up a poem to quiet you. in a bit. tonight, perhaps.
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yea, well you didn't have to delete all of your work now did you?
I advertised your work in my journal, you know. Now I've let everyone down. no YOU, let everyone down. you, letter-downer, you.
okay, I wont say more on that subject until I get my poem in to you.
I've slowed down muchly because of school too. can't be failing in the real world now, can we?
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WTF? All your poems disappeared out of my messages list! I didn't get to read all of them! What the frick is going on?
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LOL..drool?
you suck up.
ps. It's much more attractive when writers humble themselves. ah scratch that, it get's irritating when someone goes on and on about how much they need critisism when it's near perfect. nevermind. just shush.
I'm just jealous of talent.
really.
(look at that, two notes in a single day!) (study break)
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I will have that to you by Sunday.
I would say friday, but someone else gave me another challange that I promised him by friday. So I'll try to have it by Friday, but most definately by Sunday. hopefully.
Yes, I will.
Thomas the train guy thing.
(geez, it seems like I have nothing better to do doesn't it? Than to comment on your page practically daily, that is. Should boost your already inflated ego muchly. Too bad I'm not prolific! hah!)
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Thank you so much for the comment on Invitation. My initial idea was the dance of the dead... an invitation through to the 'other side'. Temptress of sin and disease.
Good to see you took my advice as well.
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ack! I'm soooo sorry. Why on earth did I think you were a female? I feel so bad about that. Well you are a wonderful writer either way. Keep up the excellent work.
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thank you so much for the high praise of my faved poem - blushing in progress - i'm about to enter into the realms of your work - wish me luck
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yay! and look! you're on the 12 thing...(something about 12 featured poets-something like that) See? The best people still come out on top.
About now, I'm going to head into some creative writing classes to learn all about it.
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Thanks so much for your two cents on my latest pieces.
Yes, I told black halo that I agreed with him. I don't think I'm talented enough to change it (Summon the Reaper) without creating a whole new poem though. I think it's quite decided that I shouldn't rely on meter and rhyme to make me a good poet . It was fun to practise and exercise different formats, however.
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