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Heinkelboy05
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[2015-09-01 18:31:29 +0000 UTC]
"Just your average dude."
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 12208; Deviations: 80; Watchers: 475
Watching: 192; Pageviews: 62313; Comments Made: 398; Friends: 192
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Not sure.Favorite movies: Star Wars, Lord of the Rings, the Hobbit, the Kingβs Speech, Dune (2021), Harry Potter
Favorite TV shows: NCIS, Castle, Mythbusters, Code Geass, RWBY, Madam Secretary, Game of Thrones, House of the Dragon, Arcane, Sharpe, Avatar: The Last Airbender, The Legend of Korra
Favorite bands / musical artists: Sabaton, Coldplay, Fallout Boys, Imagine Dragon, Breaking Benjamin
Favorite books: Dune, ASOIAF, Les Miserables, Harry Potter, Metro series
Favorite writers: J.R.R. Tolkein, George R.R. Martin, JK Rowling
Favorite games: Valkyria Chroinicles, Warhammer 40k, Dishonored, Call of Duty, Dragon Age, Horizon Zero Dawn, Jedi: Fallen Order, Star Wars: The Old Republic
Favorite gaming platform: PS5, PSP, PC, Nintendo Switch, Xbox Series X
Tools of the Trade: PC
Other Interests: Fanfiction
# Comments
Comments: 66
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Happy Early Birthday,Β Max Gajevic.
If I misspelled your name in any way whatsoever, I beg and beseech thee to both inform me of what/where and to forgive me my goof-up.
Sincerely one of your hopefully entirely too many fans;
Adalack.
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Thanks. And don't worry, you spelled my name right.Β
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Hey, there's something I want to get off my chest, but don't take this the wrong way. I like the way you tried to mix the WW2 with VC, but... it's a nutshell. There was one time I did the same thing like you did and honestly I didn't feel comfortable the way I was making references.
Also Jack, with all due respect, he's the most boring character I ever met. How the hell can be the son of an ambassador, knows many languages, has medals and a tactical expert, and has an ex-fiance, at a YOUNG AGE?! I'm sorry but this type of character doesn't catch my attention. I would be if Jack would be older.
One more issue I have with your story is because you didn't feature Selvaria, the most lovely character of the franchise.
Please, know that this is just my opinion, and this might sound unbelievable to you but thanks to your story, I know what to do with mine.
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Believe it or not, that's not the worst comment I've ever had about my writing. I do believe that this was the worst.
"This is my retelling of Valyria chronicles in with a few twists. Namely just ripping off the plot from Code Geass and putting my unlikable gary-stu self insert as the main character. Because I'm a talentless hack with no imagination."
Yeah. And to be fair I came up with the concept of this story years ago. I've gotten better at writing over the years and know where my mistakes are but the story is so long and I've worked on it for so long that I can't fix everything. Only what I can. But I think I can do enough to make the story better.
So your comment isn't the worst I've read about my writing. I know it's not the best and I know where my faults are. But for this story, I do it just to be creative and fun while trying to be as realistic as I can at times.
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Have you thought making a rewritting perhaps? It's okay if you're not planning, I don't blame you. But at least it's good you're trying to make the story better to compensate your mistakes. But I can assure you your writing is not the worse as I made. Like, my story was like... a patriotic propaganda story. The worse thing I have done is to make the characters talk how important is to defend your country, to protect your comrades, Every. Goddamn. Minute.
Eventually I deleted my story because I couldn't stand my cringy writing, but now I'm doing this again but this time carefully.
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Perhaps. Maybe when I am finished with the series. For now, I am merely going to fix what I can without changing it too dramatically and work with what I got. So far, the first volume of my story will be finished soon and I can focus on other fanfiction story ideas I have, writing them while I work on building up my second volume till it's ready for me to write.
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Basically, it follows the events following the Liberation of Randgriz. Gallia's war effort is revitalized as a coalition of troops from America, Great Britain, France, and Russia arrive to support the Gallian forces in pushing out the German forces. In response, the Germans pour in reinforcements to help counter the Gallians reinforcements. The battles here that are covered are from the aftermath of the Liberation of Randgriz to the Battle of Naggiar Fields. So here it'll be five nations against Germania. But the Germans refortify the areas under their control, showing that they aren't willing to give up their investment in conquering Gallia without a fight.
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I plan on writing for the whole VC story, from Bruhl to the final battle on the Marmota. However, I have already gone over a hundred chapters so far that I have decided, and already announced in some of my later chapters, that I am going to be splitting this into volumes, with the current one going to end after the Liberation of Randgriz part that I am currently writing.
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So what's gonna happen in the second volume?
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Basically, it follows the events following the Liberation of Randgriz. Gallia's war effort is revitalized as a coalition of troops from America, Great Britain, France, and Russia arrive to support the Gallian forces in pushing out the German forces. In response, the Germans pour in reinforcements to help counter the Gallians reinforcements. The battles here that are covered are from the aftermath of the Liberation of Randgriz to the Battle of Naggiar Fields. So here it'll be five nations against Germania. But the Germans refortify the areas under their control, showing that they aren't willing to give up their investment in conquering Gallia without a fight.
(Accidentally sent this on an earlier message.)
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